Great chapter omg

Wasn’t bad I liked it and enjoyed how you protrayed them both...I am a fan of Arya and Jaqen together I think their cute together despite the age...hopefully you’ll do more of this kind or any other pairings :) stay strong wit it

TE AMO MUJER!

I've been looking for some good jaqarya fics and it's been difficult to find good stories of these two. I'm not quite a fan of -ahem- smut, but I really enjoyed this piece. it's just magnificient, you did a great job portraying them. The dialogues, how they act, even the way the story develops, it's just perfect! The characters are in character, you remain faithful to who they are even in these circumstances. It feels authentic, like part of the canon (well, future canon...)

What I liked the most is it feels authentic. Arya's refusal to give her virginity to a man she doesn't know and asking this man she trust to be her first was very spot on. His hesitation to do it and finally his words "all men must serve" were IC too. It didn't feel wrong, actually it felt like she'd do that and that would be his reaction.

As for the rest of the story, is excelent too. Her decision to leave the FM, feeling so empty after having to sleep with the men she has to kill. I cannot say anymore. To summarize: this is the epitome of perfection

I want to translate this into Spanish so badly! If you're still here I'd love to hear of you.

Thank you for writing this beautiful piece of fiction.

PS. (I can assure you my grammar is far better in my mother tongue)

I love this

This is wonderful.

I totally loved this piece. )

Such a sweet story.

Wowowowow! Mooooooooore!

I think, it's just amazing! :) A job well done.
It was so good to read. It felt like canon. I really hope it will become real.
I'm shipping Jaqen and Arya sine they've met. I'm glad I'm not the only one. ;)

Loved it!

Super enjoyable, I adored it.

Okay, so I think I've read most of the Arya/Jaqen fics here, and I must say that this is the best one! It just works so well, the characterization, the flashbacks, etc. Great story! I really hope you write a longer one :D

It's a rare feat when Jaqen's so perfectly in character. You're a very talented writer.

Well done. Thanks for sharing!

I love it soooooooo much write more!