| Reviews for Father's Watch |
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Airee Ichinose chapter 1 . 2/24/2018 Rolmao |
Adorable Kitten chapter 1 . 3/5/2013 Fuuuuunnnnnnyyyyy as hell. Cute as well. |
butterfly here i come chapter 1 . 7/7/2011 I can't stop laughing oh my gosh I'm crying from laughing so hard great story |
Lady Labrat chapter 1 . 5/10/2010 I'm laughing so hard I can't get enough air in my lungs |
Crimson Hope chapter 1 . 2/12/2009 aw go PAPAS |
Lady Luv of the East chapter 1 . 8/14/2007 so funny, what a nice conversation between friends hahhahahahahahah |
runawayy chapter 1 . 8/14/2007 hahaha! their dads are just like them! |
spikesfirstluv chapter 1 . 11/10/2004 i dont know what to say... Um funfunfunfun! *runs around like hyper-monkey-on-crack |
general zargon chapter 1 . 9/29/2004 really liked the story. can you write a sequel? well keep up the good work bye. |
Loupey Lady chapter 1 . 5/6/2004 Oh what fun! Yes, it does work, and I appreciate your decision to use titles instead of made-up names... easier to follow, too! |
C.C. Meow chapter 1 . 9/10/2003 SO COL! I just loved it! You should write more like that! Wish I could write that good, WA *BIG BREATH* WA...*sniff* but I have a habbit of writing stories that are really, really, really...(50 more "reallys") fluffy. |
Shini'chi Raine chapter 1 . 8/27/2003 Awesome! That was funny (the part w/ Miroku and Sango's dad) I thought that was REALLY good. Anyways, can you read one of my stories? I would really appreciate it. No one's been reading mine and... I don't mean to beg and all but... could you? I need some reviews. Some of my fics are lame but... just tell me what you think. Well, later. ~NekoYasha/NaniYasha |
lisey lee chapter 1 . 1/21/2003 I loved it and it was pretty funny but can u add more the endin wasnt that great |
Katzztar chapter 1 . 11/10/2002 ROFL! I only had to reread the opening paragragh to understand it. hehehe I loved it, esp. the personalities of the fathers. |
Za Metallium chapter 1 . 9/18/2002 Quite amusing, but the format detracted tremendously. The opening paragraph only barely explains who the players are, and only those with a fairly in-depth knowledge of Inuyasha would get the "Inutaisho" reference. In the script format, "Higurashi" makes for confusion as well. Not to say that your story wasn't amusing; I just think it's in need of (and WORTHY of) a rewrite/reformatting. The parallel interaction is funny, just hard to follow. |