Bit sketchy in spots, but over all a very good story.

Aww. I liked this. It did start off so simple and sweet too, and then the world exploded! I loved it! I hope you write more in the future.

I love Jack's reaction to missing Ianto.

I had to start over to remember the story. Mir was worth it. I like the story, I just wonder if the stated reason for these visitors is the real one. If they have any control over time it seems they would have already known Jack's relationship status. I'm guessing you'll tighten this all up as you finish up. So far I don't like these guys, but they don't scare me either.

Poor Gwen! It must be horrible always being the one left out of things, and she rarely gets to see her friends outside Torchwood, she must feel very lonely and isolated. I'm sure Rhys is great, but sometimes you need friends as well.

what happened? OOOOO please pick this back up.

Fantastic story,just read all forward to reading more

Great chapter

Naught naughty Ianto. I bet Jacks not going to be too pleased with that plan. I#ts bound to end in disater, right?

Very mystyrious indeed

Ooooh who is this mystrious lady I wonder ...

I love this fic. The way you've written it just pulls my heart along.

Ok,now i'm really curious what with the interest in
Ianto.I need more

Terrific chapter,I'm curious also,i'm with Ianto there something strange about Luna,and why was she asking for Gwen and not Jack or Ianto

Just found this story and really enjoyed the first three chapters,can't wait to read more