This was a terrific story! I am so Glad that I read this!

My goodness! What an amazing story! You know this is quite seldom since there's hardly any story with deep love as such and an M rating! This is one of the best fanfictions I have read and I'm completely awestrucked by the deep connection between May and Drew. Very well done and keep up the good work! Hope you write a one-shot sequel to this!

this was wonderful and awful at the same time, I wanted them to live so bad

I loved this story. Well written, planned out and with good characterisation. It's a shame we don't know what happened to Max, though.

This story was amazing!

Drew always keeps his promises..
Nice end phrase :)
Anyways, I hope there will be a sequel to this!
Well.. I dunno how a sequel will work considering May and Drew are..*sniff* dead..
But maybe like being revived or something I dunno.
But a sequel would be nice..yes yes..very nice indeed
Haha I loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove
This story
And I read it a while back but didn't have time to review..soo..here I am now!

Yep, umm..yeah..
Not gonna lie
Crying girl over here
And by crying girl I mean me
I thought it was gonna be a happy ending like the monster is defeated lalalalala..dancing with little pink bunnies surrounded by roses and other flowers..lalalala..
But no
It's a sad ending with death
I love it :P
It's nice to have a change in the endings
And this Romeo and Juliet ending is amazing
I'm just gonna..
Just gonna go cry in a corner..excuse me for a sec..

OMG that was a great story! Kept me hooked until the very end... Waahhh... May and Drew just HAD to die...

...WHY THE HELL DID IT END UP LIKE ROMEO AND JULIET!... All this time I've still been waiting for a happy ending... well, screw me that ain't never gonna happen is it? :(

I HATE that I LOVE you so much for making this tragic tale. Usually when i'm reading something they will have a sad ending then i'll just be like "aw" and moved on to the next story. Very few books have interested me so much I can see myself reading it again and again, but stories are a whole different story usually and I have no interest in them. This story is a really good one because it kept me up all night wanting to see what was going to happen to one of my favorites couples. There were parts that made me laugh out loud and the ending really got me, I read looked to see how many chapters there were going to be and when I read that they were going to have an epilogue I though they were going to have their little happy ending and I thought it was going to be like any other story. Your ending made me really sad that now i'm hoping they are together forever in the after life being happy :( I was brought to tears so I have to thank you for that and hate you as well. I serious would love to see another story about this since it was well paced for me.

Another beautiful chapter.
You always surprise me making something unexpected happen.
First Norman, now Ash, who was away for such a long time...
I love your story, I love the characters, the situations and their relations. I'll never get tired of telling it to you :)

Norman...how could you?
Woah...I'm really crying...you totally got me entranched, every chapter is really beautiful, I have no other words to express it.

I really love this story.
It's so full of meaning, and, your intention or not, I can totally see so many similiarities with our ordinary society.
I enjoy every moment I read it. :)

Oh...I didn't read this story in so long, but it got me totally interested once again...
And as much as happy was this chapter at first, I can't really believe what happened in the end...
Oh my...now I can't stop reading!

Ohhh...I'm starting to love each character even more! :D
Max Ash And obviously May and Drew! 8D
I can't wait to continue reading :3