JESUS MAN. THAT WAS SO GOOD FOR A SHORT STORY. IMMA GO READ THE SISTER STORY.

Ahhh...damn.

wow, wow, wow, that canNOT be the end! o_o

at least tell us the antagonist...

wooooow what! O.O

Congrats on reaching the end. So, does that mean that Arthur Kirkland/England is trapped in a never ending loop? It almost seems a bit depressing, unless he was a video game character, and every time he fails, the game resets. In that world, it would be something that America asked Japan to design...I digress. Thanks for the update. While, I would have liked Arthur to escape and return to Hetaliaworld, this ending is fitting. It has a "twilight zone" feel. That's the impression the end dialogue gives. By the way, if you read manga, I have a suggestion for you. There's a manga that's currently circulating called Classmate Kamimua Yuuka wa Kou Itta that's about a boy who one day starts talking to a girl in his class and all the other students gang up on him and attack him. The girl smugly explains that's because he's a robot and he has a glitch that goes against his programming. Anyway, it has that same "is this world real or not," "can we escape," and "why are we here." If you are interested, I highly recommend it. The only drawback I'd that it's ecchi, and while I did n' t why it would be in the beginning, towards the later chapters it's painfully obvious. Still, if you can wade through that, you might appreciate the atypical relation between the male MC and the female MC.
If you do give it a try, I'd love to hear a second opinion on it.
Thanks for the update, once again.

-Kittyhawk09

WAIT HOLD THE MACARONI

THIS IS IN THE UNIVERSE OF HETALIA SISTERS, RIGHT?

Dude, this was really awesome.

Update soon.

Thanks for updating. I feel for england's confusion. It's a scary situation knowing that you can't wake up into your world and now the only glitch that was actually a good thing, is gone. :C I can't wait to see what's next. We're always onboard for your stories. U they make life better. thank you for that. C:

Alfred!

I absolutely love these sort of stories :D it's actually quite terrifying, especially now England is alone, really does make you feel isolated, the poor bugger :,( there's so much to be explained but I'll just wait for more chapters :3 on another note, this story reminds me a bit of "Life on Mars" quite a good telly program :)

This is a very interesting story!
More please!

Noooooooo! *immediately screamed after freezed because Alfred is forgotten*
ALFRED IS GONEEEE ! Whyyyyyyy ? ! ! !

the chapters get smaller and smaller, with more and more cliffhangers and ages to wait,
veryyyyy irritating.
however the story is good

Oh my gosh, I love this fanfic so much! The plot is so twisty and intense, and now I really hope Alfred is still alive DX I'm sad it's so close to ending since I just read the entire thing in one sitting, but I want to know who the guardians are and how Arthur gets home too!

I know it's not the real America BUT WHY?