i love this like i said before need more!

I loved this! I don't know why, but I have this thing for Jake and beaches... So your story was perfect! And the wolf-pack there too just made it perfect!

Keep Writing,
xX Janelle ;) Xx

Tottally Vute! Dump Edward first next time Bells! Keep up your writing it's great how you twist it a bit and keep some facts in there to! great job!

I like this story please update

hello there!i loved your story. :) i think you should continue ur the way we have a is not my first languange either.:) by the way may i ask What is your first languange? :)