This story makes me smile. :)

I'm enjoying how you've set everything up so far, and your characterization of Danny is just killer. I hope to see more soon!

Loving It So Far. Which Is funny because when I read the ones from high school they are so wired to me. I don't know how to explain it. It just is. But I'm Loving and liking this. So Hope you keep it going.

I really like this story! It's awesome! Keep going! I wanna know what happens!

...I'm saying that you shouldn't make foolish bets against people you don't know."...

Our Danny is wicked clever.

Steve does not know what's about to impact his life.

That was great. Danny already is a good reader of people. He knew exactly that he would get Steve to read more if he clothed it into a bet. Steve is highly competitive.

Interesting start. Will Danny become part of the group, and what do they do crime-fighting wise?

sound interesting...

Seems like a promising story can't wait for more.

Laura xx.