As always, it's a pleasure to read your work!

I absolutely adore the way you write Shinichi/Conan.

WOW, I really enjoyed that
It was such not unusual style, but it was hilarious and compelling at all the right places!

This fanfic was published before I was even born

Holy crap YES THIS IS A THING OF BEAUTY

AMAZING... WOW. Great story felt like i was actually there and i will start on the next story really soon... It was like an all you could eat buffet and i got in for free

Oh such fun! I agree Takagi NEEDED to have put the pieces together in the anime. You've made such a great mystery, and have been so great in portraying the characters. Fantastic read! Thank you!

Not to mention that it's pouring outside, so a bee couldn't have just flown in. I somehow doubt that a bee hive is in the bus. Poison on the bee stinger then? Anyhow, Awesome story! In the afterlife ;) why were they all gathered a Wataru's grave? The incident happened way too long ago... So it's just for plot purposes?

Great story - I'm going to be laughing about Ran's tattoo for a long time!
I loved the way you handled Takagi finding out about Conan/Shinichi; it seemed very realistic. I've always thought those two could be good friends.
Thanks for making me laugh!

Thank you for writing the story, it was really fun! It was exciting and funny, a great combination.

Nice story you've got here and I'd really like to read more, but the bold italic font is downright annoying.

Loves it and was happy that Conan had his adorable moments. I think it matches the tone of the anime pretty well. :)

I think it would be a cool idea to wright a sequel where (after a while of everything going back to normal to account for the new plot details and characters that were introduced since you wrote this) Sato notices Takagi acting strange around Conan and pressures Conan/Kudo's secret out of him. And then together (maybe along with some other characters such as Haibara, Heiji, Sara, etc.) they can, with a lot of drama, trauma, violence, etc. along the way of course, defeat the Black Org. You could even wright a little after story where, since there is no danger anymore, Kudo reveals his secret to everyone and has to deal with the drama caused by it (I personally think that the reaction of the detective boys would be hilarious)

Great story by the way!

good story! but one thing that I absolutely hate is the bold font. it's just sort of like glaring into my eyes and it's annoying. but otherwise, it's all good. keep up the good work

This sounds good, but please, don't write the whole text with bolt and italicize on. It makes reading very difficult, and I had to stop in half-way because it gives me headache. Before I could simply had copy-pasted in to my own computer for reading, but 'cause you nowdays can't do that in FFnet, I had to stop this here :(