This is good so far. Angie's got a bit of an attitude and Zane can't keep her out of the fight.

I've been waiting months 4 an update

More More More More! lol i truly love this story :) I wish there was better action scenes though :\ but its still an awesome story. Thanks!

Rotris

Cool! I like

That was pretty neat, the ending tense, and the POV did give it some flavor.

It feels oddly choppy, and more details would be a good thing (unless they're lists of clothing descriptions, which are boring). So far, everyone's coming off as a checked box on the List of Required Character Types. Cheerleader, Jock, Smothering Dad, et cetera.

Nicely paced, I enjoyed the fights, and Angie is finally demonstrating that "genius" thing she mentioned, without coming off as a typical nerd stereotype.

Seriously, I really want a description of the Ranger suits. More descriptions in general would be appreciated, though you do have enough to avoid being confusing.

Thank you, looking forward to seeing the other Rangers start showing up!

Thank you for the shout out: I'm always glad to have it confirmed that someone is genuinely putting effort into their story and listens to even the critics. Making Angie have trouble finding the morphers worked quite well, and giving her these challenges make it seem more believable, not just like padding.

While Angie's obnoxiousness is rather unique, it's also overpowering my empathy for the actual Rangers, making it harder for me to care what they do and what happens in the story. Wait a second: is she the genius with anger issues in the summary? Her behavior seems more in line with disdain for every other human being but her brother than anger issues.

And for what it's worth, I am not a fan of trying to substitute pictures for description. Sure, pictures can add to a story, or be good references for coming up with descriptions, but it should be able to stand on its words.

I would really like to get to know all of the characters you bring up in the summary, and watch them play off each other. Don't worry about the pacing, either; it's justifying itself.

Nice combination of character development and exposition. Their Dad's ambiguous fate is unique. Zane and Angie are a very credible set of siblings, avoiding the stereotypes of Protective Older Brother and Obnoxiously Spunky Girl nicely.

The only new quibbles I have are with the italicized teaser, and bits of the exposition. We know Angie's going to become a Ranger: it's quite obvious, really, given how much screen time she's already had. Those sorts of rhetorical questions are a pet peeve of mine. Also you somewhat got most of the important info about their parents across through the dialogue, making the narration explaining what happened rather redundant.

Thank you, looking forward to more!

This is really good! I hope you continue it soon!:)

Woot! that was epic! Can't wait fr the next chapter!

Update soon! I love the story!

NICE STORY SO FAR! I like Angie and her attitude. JUST one note. You accidently wrote yellow ranger on this chapter. But good job. GO GO POWER RANGERS! !

Angie is not a nice person, and I like that; it makes her stand out. The consistent POV is good, and I liked the glimpse into what the monsters can do. You ended in a good place, and although I usually don't care for people begging for reviews, your little setup made me chuckle.

Opening with a pronoun instead of someone's name threw me off for a few lines. There are a few jolting goof-ups; you may want to look up a beta just to smooth them over. Descriptions (sight, smell, sound, taste, touch) are your friends.

Thank you for the shout-out, and I'm glad to see that the cliches are there for a reason!

Ahhh! I love power ranger ocs. Nice chapter. I hope you can put up their descriptions soon!

This is a neat beginning. Your characters are pretty well developed, and the pacing's good, plus you have some neat ideas in here.

On the flip side, more descriptions, especially in the fight scenes, would definitely be a good thing. You do a little POV jumping sometimes, and I'd like to see fewer high school drama cliches.

However, this looks really promising. Thank you!