good story

I like your writing style and your imagination. The story is drawing me in and I know this will be one that I complete because it's worth the time. I am, however, surprised in the turnabout in Harry's attitude toward Draco. It has happened too quickly; it seems to be manipulated by the author instead of the events in the story. I think Hermoine should have been the one to (against her better judgment, of course, but out of a sense of humanity) defend their aid to Draco this early in the story. It seems more natural for it to take Harry longer to warm up to Draco, ESP considering chapter 1 and his immediate reaction to Draco being on the list for Hurricane and his action to prevent it if he could, in addition to his threats to Draco at the time, too. Otherwise, I am very pleased with the story.

Why is Harry so obsessed with caring for Teddy is it because everyone failed him as a child and how does he reconcile Remus completely failing him as a child with himself putting Teddy above all else?

An interesting story, though this world is really like from a fiction-horror book )

Once again you have gifted your readers with a story that leaves us wanting more. I love the intense bond growning between everyone. I can only hope that it makes them all stronger and that the winds of change stir them towards better change. I'm off to read the next installment!

Interesting. I have to say though, Draco is an idiot for coming to a new world with nothing on him but a wand. Transfiguring and conjuring only goes so far.

At least Hetty told them some hard truths they needed to hear before she left. I hope her journey goes well.

I hope whatever magic Ginny has there helps her train that bird.

Ahh, I'm glad Hermione was intelligent enough to bring embryos.

Will these people ever accept Malfoy? It's going to make life harder for them if they don't.

It's good someone had it out with Bill. Now I just hope he learns to control it.
This new alliance should prove interesting.

The creatures were interesting.

What is Bill going to try next? I know it's something.

I would be concerned too, but I hope that eventually they will accept it.

Err... This is new. I assume that has something to do with the magic there.