looks like he IS most certainly the boss of her...

A nice fap.

I love the vocabulary used in this piece. The imagery used is insanely explicit. "Whenever he went especially deep - to the hilt-." The character development is superb as well. I love how Korra's personality is captured throughout the entire piece, especially in the final line, "You better not think that it will happen again," she finished, and she lowered her lips to his once again." I will definitely be bookmarking this one ;)

*blush* Ahem...:) I liked that a lot! Like a lot, a lot. Now if you'll excuse me I need to go fan myself.

Whoa. That was just whoa. Good job I guess? I dont know how to review a smut without sounding like a perv, so yeah. lol

Loved it! Really an awesome smutty job. I wish LOK was on HBO.