this was perfect. their reactions to their sudden union to each other was realistic and matched their characters. temari's a bitch and shikamaru's annoyed. Ino's part in this fic was good too. I loved the conversation they had cause the whole thing's true, and the ending was really well-done.

I just know they'll learn to love each other xD

Ah I was so not prepaired for it to end there! :o I was like mmmhmm ok wow this is good what is the morning bringing and then bam the end... Nooo :O

This was really good thanks

Pleease make more :D

Write another chapter!
This story was great3

It's hilarious how Shikamaru is still blaming Asuma for everything. Kankuro's bit was amusing as well. I love the 'arranged marriage" setup, but I thought you handled it a bit differently than I have seen before. Temari can't go out and make a public scene, so she takes it out on Shikamaru. The fact that she isn't physically violent makes it seem she knows she should not be so mean to him but cannot bring herself to stop.

i think you should continue! i wanna c more! :)

I really hope they'll get to love each other...I love this pairing!