Your story is absolutely lovely! I feel that you have captured Shion and Nezumi's personalities perfectly, and even when they were apart, I could feel their connection :) Great job!

This was beautiful I can feel Netsumi's longing to be with Shion again. I look forward to the rest of this story.

I was really intrigued by your writing style; your re-imaginings were very creative, and I liked the little details you included. (And don't worry about having an irregular schedule; I'm rather guilty of that myself... _)

So well written. I found this very late at night, and wound up hooked. *laughs* its almost three in the motning and im still jidy and wanting more.

I find this fic to be just really lovely. I love how you shape the story and how real the characters are. I love this tale Nezumi tells Shion too, its so great and I think I got caught up in it just as much as Shion did. Please keep writing this, I would be just so extremely happy to read more. 3

Beautifull story. Please keep up the good work.

Oh my. I was not expecting such a ruckus with 'Mr. Shion' in charge.

This is truly intriguing. You can not possibly have complete equalized and 'fair' city- especially No. 6 with their past of deceit, genocide and discrimination. If individual people continue nurturing their individual ignorance, hatred, and prejudice then their will always be conflicts. I could go into length of how battles like the ones Shion is fighting can be both futile but entirely necessary at the same time but I'll just let the story speak for itself. _

You're a darling just for the attempt Shion. And am I the only one missing Nezumi right now...?

Oh, I really liked this chapter! I love the mention of the West Block, and the snake pit, and that whole analogy. And I also really love Shion's resolve at the end. I've always really loved that about his character - his bravery, and his determination to do the right thing. Anyway - I thought you did a nice job of bringing that out here. :)

A little to much excitement in this chapter i must say! Wonderful as usual, I really like how you not only show the improvements done to the city but also the unrest that plagues it. I really like your characterization of Shion, very IC. Shion is wonderfully portrayed here: always hopeful, caring and a little reckless!

As always, good job and I look forward to the next chapter.

Ahh I have been reading it its just that I dont have the habit to review and believe me when I say that there are more people reading. So dont give up XD. Btw I just wrote this through my phone.

what a beautiful story I love how you lead up to the final scene. actually, an extended or diffrent ending scene would be ok, or at least a summary would make sense. when are you going to pic up? I hope nezumi and shion will live together in the library. are they friends or boyfriends?