This is a very well written fic. I really enjoyed it. I love the intimacy you conveyed. It was nicely done and satisfying. It's not easy to do such a thing.

Rereading this wonderful story, this gem. Enishi left a deep wound in his already scarred heart. Great writing, deeply in character and full of raw emotion. Thank you

aches and pains i can relate to... i prefer to think of him as youkai or 'other' and his physics defying physical prowess and acrobatic abilities are explained along with longer lifespan too.
'All I Need is a Miracle' By: Vathara ...actually, all of her 'rk' crossovers would have him as youkai or 'other'. lol

it's a lovely story, she's put the idea into his head and it woudln't leave him alone, glad he did something about it.

interestingly, i just read chapter 110 of 'ache' by mamoro that is of a similar trope, fun coincidence.

i really can't believe that i hadn't read/reviewed this one before.
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This is absolutely beautiful. I loved everything about it.
Thank you for writing and sharing this gem.

This story inspires me. The use of sensory elements and details about the sounds and sights really causes me to drift into the story and welcome the dialogue as it happens.

The ending is tasteful and sweet. Overall, there's a very natural and elegant flow to your writing. Keep up the good work.

beautiful... just beautiful...

nice :)

I had to play the Intermezzo while reading the end of this fic and it was wonderful! Kudos for writing this awesome story. My heart was in puddles at the end, so much love! :)

That's a good way to approach the matter. I loved it when Kenshin finally wanted to have children of his own.

Typical of him to never think of anything beyond now. Because he was once a Wanderer, who drifted from town to town, and once an Assassin, who merely thought of the future as a goal to strive for but not something for himself.

Thankyou! i love this story.. i think it's very closed to kenshin personality. lol

this is...amazing. Truly beautiful, wonderful, touching ahhhhh you managed to capture so much of what is so loved between these two. Augh just such a fantastic job. My insides are melting in a wonderful way. Your descriptions and details are magical

Hi!
Nice piece of work!
I really love the Intermezzo, although it reminds me more of the scene when they all come back from Kyoto: it's playing in the background, especially when they say "Okaeri nasai, Kenshin" and then "Tadaima de gozaru"...
Thank you for writing this, and for making me discover this amazing piece of music!

Sincerly
Hallolo

Oh my goodness! I was looking for a well written kenshin x kaoru one shot, and here it is :D this was wonderful, really. I love the last line. I'm hoping you've written more about them!

That was incredibly sweet. Also calming and soothing. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for writing and sharing the story!