Ahhhhhhh... this story is good

amazing ending i was rooting for them too, it makes me realise that love will eventually find us all someday, even if we believed we did not deserve it at times, it finds us in the most incredible circumstances not by random or some coincidence fate decides when we shall meet but you decide how much that special person is worth fighting for and to never give up the person that loved you back. i can only dream of telling the one i loved my true feelings you only live in the moment just once and it's hard to speak when the only three words you really want to say are the most terrifying words you can express to someone that you love terrifying and beautiful all in one .

Aww I loved the story :-D:)3

amazing story, I like it so much! 3

Wow loved this story!

I look forward to part two. ;-)

Keep up the good work.

In Love & Light,

Zona Rose };-

Awww a very cute end. Thanks for sharing your story :)

Ha, seems like everything ended well for them...!
Scaglietti, had he not such an ego he would have succeeded. But no, he had to make so many mistakes. Stupid guy.
I laughed at Nanoha's arrival, she took out so many officers Jail should have taken her with him xD
That was a nice story, a bit of everything and not too short nor too long. And the most important, a NanoFate ending! :D
Thank you for this story, I hope you'll keep on writing! :)

D: aw darn it it ended such a shame!

Alright! That was a good ending! I'm happy for them!

Thanks for all your hard work! Great story all the way! I look forward to read your future projects! And Happy New Year!

Wow I'm speechless. I didn't expect the White Devil to make an entrance. But man! That was hilarious! Go Nanoha!

Lol nice radio broadcast! Nice chapter! I can't wait to see how this end. Hopefully with Jail locked up, or even better dead. XD

That was a really nice ending, great job! I enjoyed reading this story from beginning to end.

Ahaha "My foot slipped" the best line ever!

Jail really is a fragile man, getting his butt kicked by a simple high school girl. Yay and now he is behind bars for good. Great chapter.

awesome story i so can't wait til the next chapter good work :)

pretty please update!