well done. it touched my heart.

I can't even put into words how much I STILL love this fic, years after I read it for the first time.

This story really made me wanna cry, the form you wrote the actitud of Payson , I really liked it. And the pain that she suffered or the love triangle that she lived it and the existential problems , all of that, really really really impressed me, keep writting, you are amazing.

I'm almost crying at how perfect the Lauren/Payson friendship was here. I need more of that in my life because it was my favourite thing about series 3 and maybe the show ever if I'm honest with myself. I'm scared to write it and fuck it up though so I'm glad I found this.

I was avoiding reading this because of the many ships that I don't ship but you made me love it. I'm smiling whilst I hold tears in, so what more can I say?

Your characterisation was so perfect here, every character. I feel sad to leave this universe and that's a rare thing when a story arc feels as complete as this one does. If you weren't my favourite MIOBI author before (which you totally were) you definitely are now.

Loved it. Was hoping she chose Sasha but it was much more complex than that and I liked it. Good job

WTF.

that being said, this is ahmazing. too tired to disect this and tell you how much i loved every little bit, but wow. 3

I never got into payson/rigo on the show (I thought he was the worst of all her pairings) but I actually really likes this. Haha I loved the sasha hair comment! It was really bad on season 3! Like so terrible that I couldn't even crush on Sasha in season 3 lol! Haha and of course I love the stable perfect nickelly! While I do enjoy when u write about other pairs I will forever love nickelly and desperately read/love every story about them (so u should probably write more lol :-)) cant wait for whatever u come up with next!

Beautifully tragic story.

WOW... euhmm.. yeah.. this is intense.. I loved it.. Kelly and Nicky are hilarious.. I can't really mind that you killed Rigo. never liked him.. Austin is his crazy self, Lauren is fucking awesome.. Payson is sooo soo sad, but I loved how you wrote her.. Sasha is really sweet and sad at the same time.. Kaylie, I don't care for her, but you wrote her well:)

I loved this.. are you going to make it more than a one-shot.. hope so!

xoxo Laura

Well this story... I dont have much to say, not because it wasn't good; it was really good. I just had so many mixed emotions. Well it looks like I'm going to be outnumbered here, lol, but I think you should out Austin/payson together because I think they could help each other get back their spirits and such and if nothing else, they are just so awesome together. But considering this is listed as payson/Sasha, I have a feeling that the odds are against me right now. Overall, good story!

Ok so let me tell u this. Ive never had such an intense reaction to any story. I mean. I cant even properly see what im typing right now but i just want to wrench it out of my chest and into this review box so i can feel a bit better.

I didnt shed a single tear throughout the whole story. Not a single one. Granted i felt sad, uncomfy and distressed at times. But i didnt cry at all. But then i reached the last line.. "Because we said forever" and i just started bawling like an idiot. Like actually crying while balancing my phone and hiding from my mom coz she already thinks im a bit psychotic. Basically, I know what 'the dam broke' means now.

Absolutely breathtaking. Brilliant writing. So sad. So raw. So... beautiful *sigh*

This was different but not in a bad way. It was different in an awesome way. It's amazing how you take these characters and make them your own. I would definitely like to read more fics from this alternate universe, mostly because the interactions between all of the characters are so interestng. I always thought Kelly and Lauren had the potential to be good friends. Too bad we'll never really see that from the show. I'd actually really like to read about Kaylie's temper tantrum after London. I think that definitely needs to be expanded upon or else it will bother me for ages. Anyway, great job with this. Hope to see more from this 'verse and We Fall Between.

More!

Write more. I wanna know who does Payson choose. I'm crossing my fingers for Sasha.

Butcher B,

I see you like the nickname. Good. You really live in your own universe. I hope you know that this is cheating! I wait and wait and wait for you to write a Payson/Sasha and you finally say you do, but there wasn't anything really! It doesn't count. I guess you have to write another. I see your KayAus hate still shines through even though they don't even say anything to each other. And Nickelly as always. I agree with your other review saying she was surprised by the no sex. Finger fucking is your signature. Most times I think it's disgusting how you make the characters just have sex, but now it doesn't seem right without it. Interesting.