Reviews for With A Broken Soul
ANONYMOUS chapter 9 . 4/9/2015
This is a really interesting story. I like how you wrote the characters, they aren't like superheroes, they all have flaws. But yet, they still do incredibly selfless things. Well, some characters at least.

Your writing style is great also! I really like the story pace, it's not to low and not to fast.
Koomahana chapter 9 . 6/2/2014
Nice! I'm hooked! I can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon!
Koomahana chapter 4 . 6/2/2014
okay you did the most irritating thing i can think of in this chapter, if two different people are speeking then create a different paragraph for the new speaker, please and thank you
Koomahana chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
where did you get that picture? I can't find it!
hama431 chapter 9 . 8/24/2013
Update
Innocence and Instinct chapter 9 . 3/30/2013
I really love the direction this story is heading in. I've been dying to find good stories having to do with Sakura going back in time to change the past and stories that generally follows the Naruto series timeline, but with a much stronger Sakura present from the very first chapter.

I already know of a trilogy that is extremely original on it's own. It begins pre- Uchiha massacre with the Haruno clan massacre. This story even goes beyond what the current Naruto series has planned with a very strong, in terms of both mind and body, Sakura Haruno. This is evident in the third story in the series when Sakura comes back from her own departure from Konoha. You may want to check out the stories. You might even gain some inspiration from it. If you don't, I can assure you that you will not be disappointed by it. The story line is magnificent and the author even has other stories with the very same strong Sakura set in modern day.

Search up Strength of a Cherry blossom by animea-hime.
leafstone chapter 9 . 3/20/2013
great story.
LilyVampire chapter 9 . 3/9/2013
This is super interesting! I can't wait to read more, it's great!
Xxlove foreverxX chapter 9 . 1/11/2013
Hey i don't know if it will actually show but if you wanna tell the reviews from me, i always say what chap. i read at the end. Srry for the mix up. Anyways, I've read through your story a few times and have noticed few mistakes but nothing to serious. Hopefully you don't forget it like you did last time.
- just read chap. 9-
(see this is what i mean.)
Xxlove foreverxX chapter 9 . 1/8/2013
Hey as a fellow reviewer, can I ask this question? Before the story continues can you suggest a song to listen to? Cause I listen to nothing and it's sooo quiet at night.
Anyways, I like on how her "demon/Angel" gives her the spirit she had before she fights with Orochimaru. Hopefully you can update soon for everyone, those who review and so those that don't, and will be grateful. (Cause people should know you have a life and should be grateful Cause you take your own time to write on ff.)
-Just finished chap. 9-
Xxlove foreverxX chapter 8 . 1/8/2013
Umm I don't know if I'm that Guest but if I am, then thank you so much! (as you can see by the review the last time I read, it's cause I couldn't get online for awhile...hehe srry for getting grounded :(... Anyways I get what you mean on how you had to show her training to show her new strength. Some stories I've read skip the training and only have flashbacks about it.
Keep on writing this awesome story!
- Just finished chap. 8-
ChErRyBlOsSoM274 chapter 9 . 12/18/2012
O_O T.T -_- that was nice. bravo. i love this story please update soon this is a really cool saku time travel fic ;D
101bubbly chapter 9 . 12/18/2012
Okay, this chapter is epic! . I totally love it! And, ah, would you mind if I used it in a story of my own? I won't be posting it, its just a personal story, and I will give credit where credit is due, but I simply adore how you wrote it! Thanks for writing it out hun!
AboMakea chapter 9 . 12/17/2012
eeeeeeeeeeeee! you really know your stuff! please I can't wait for your next chapter!
thelastshanghai chapter 9 . 12/17/2012
This is an intriguing story...any pairings? Having a sasuXsaku or itaXsaku would be cool!
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