Another interesting story unfinished. I feel sad.

Yay! Bunniesnfish is (sorta) back! Quality writing, as always, and I'm glad you decided to continue!

Love it! Update soon! :)

Awesome first chapter so far I can't wait to read more and see how things go!

That was exciting! I think you really nailed Zuko this chapter. His dialogue was perfect, and Katara was pretty good too. I'm also glad that you didn't kill off Iroh. That would have made me sad. Hope you find the time to write; it's tough for me to wait for the next chapters!

Another great chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

OOOOh! I can feel the suspense building! PLEASE PLEASE update soon! :D

Wow! its gets better every time you post a new chapter!

I like how this is turning out so far, but just to be sure...how many chapters are you planing to do on this story? i'm dying in anticipation here!

Love how you portrayed Ty Lee and Azula here. you gave Ty Lee a whole new side without failing to explain her OOCness...and the way you gave Azula the sense that she hasn't completely 'lost it' gives her a more sinister presence in the plot.

Absolutely love it! please UPDATE SOON! _

Great chapter! things are getting more and more interesting!
keep it up! i hope you update soon! _

Good chapter. :) I thought you portrayed Azula very in character. A little manic, but still calculating. I think this was supposed to be some kind of setup chapter, m'right? Looking forward to reading the next one very much.

I hope Ty Lee makes it out okay! She's taken out a whole troupe of elite Earthbenders (Mai helped, but Ty Lee took away all of their bending) and others besides. Hope she succeeds, because it'll take more than fighting to succeed with her contact.

Whoa! Aang and Toph made it to the Sun Warriors, but it looks like the weapon is a touchy subject. Oops!

Azula certainly has two big arsenals up her sleeve! (shivers)

What an interesting concept for a story! I really like it so far.

Yes! You updated! I wonder if Azula will run into Aang and Toph when she visits the sun Benders. Please update soon!

Good job on this chapter! I liked seeing Ty Lee and Suki; they were both very much in character. And I think their part in the story is panning out well. Looking forward to seeing them close in on Azula.
The little puzzle you had in the prison was a nice touch, but I have one little question, er... thought, I guess. I don't really see why Azula couldn't take the stone with her. I mean, I get the impression that it was not a very big rock. And if it was big, how could they pry it out by just using his sword? But, hey, it was just a little thing I noticed. I still enjoyed the chapter a ton! Keep it coming!

Great chapter! I like how this is going so far...

i hate the idea of hurting Aang, so i try to avoid it in the stories im working on. but i love how you added the cute Taang scene in the end!

good job! Please UPDATE SOON! *puppy-dog eyes*