This was a lot of fun but I just couldn't picture Posca calling his master "Julius," no matter how long they've known each other.

Could you write a fanfic about Vorenus' daughters? I bet you'd be really good at it!

I liked the story and I think that from what you said about how it was soupposed to be, that I like this version better.

I liked the last part with Caesar crying out in Poscas shoulder, that was probably my favorite part.

Really good, keep up the great work.