Sorry, but i just can't stand how oc based and long, and boring this story is! I only made it to like, the third chapter and i gave up! Normally i can get through stories and boredom like this, but i can't take it! To be honest, i was only here because of the rainbow dash and soarin names in the description! Because i've read more then i can handle without seeing any of Soarin (and a brief, undescribed scene with Rainbow Dash) I have to abandon this story! No offence, really- i just think you should post less oc like stories on fanfiction, and maybe not have the 2 "main characters" in your description a shipping pairing in a story where you can't tell if they ever end up together! :/

Uuuuuugggghhh

UUUUUUUGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH

DONE

TOO MANY TYPOS AND BORING DESCRIPTIONS OF EVERYTHING

LITERALLY EVERYTHING

GAWD

SO DONE WITH THIS STORY

Great job!

So human zombie have close to 0 intelligence and only eat brains but pony zombies are pretty much intelligent and could be your favorite pet at the price of a sugar cue? Lol that's kinda weird but hey with ponies anything can happen.
Again the night forge bit confused me a little and while it's not really a big deal, I know have to go read yet another persons fan fic to understand something in yours.
Rest of the Fic was great yet again! Also nice lead into the next chapter.

Why do bad asses all ways refuse medical help?
Also humans must come by surprisingly regularly seeing as how Nurse Redheart patched Eric up without any hitches. Or was it a superficial wound?
Is Mat like the guy from Prototype or something? One minute he has claws the next he's building muscle mass? And Leoj kinda confuses me, is he a god, immortal, alien? Il probably read fan fics concerning those two but I would have liked more in depth descriptions.
Rest of fic was one again really good.

Aaaaaaand on of my question has been answered! Different times!
I also find it really... Idk cool to read?... How one minute Erics a great bad ass type guy and the next hes feeling homicidal towards celestia.
Love the 300 quote (I guess Thermopylae quote would be correct?). Please tell me you used "Tonight we dine in hell"
in a later chapter.
Loved the battle scene altough I dont really get the whole throughing his main weapons at zombies thing. Also I liked how the guys 2 OCs are introduced

Well we know Twilight did in fct know about humans before hand because of Keith.
I just realized: are Keith and Eric from different earths? Or same earth but different time periods? Cause from reading the MLZ Prequel I'm pretty sure Keith wasn't fighting cannibals in Iraq

"For I am the baddest Motherfucker on the face of this planet." Holy god you had my sides hurting. I read that and for some reason just couldnt stop laughing at how awesome it. Also you ever gonna say how that Lazarus (that right spelling?) got inside?

Oh this not go at all, not only his Eric becoming evil but this is going to be bad for Mat as well as i only know why.

Just hope it ever will come to that...

THIS IS GOING TO BE GREAT!

WOW! NOW THIS WAS A EPICLY EPIC OF EPICNESS FOR A CHAPTER LOL! XD

LOL AND WWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOO! MATS A UNSTOPBLE FORCE OF DEVASTATION LOL XD

BLACK DRAGON! AWESOME!

lol...wow...i should have know that Leoj would do something like that lol. But know i'm really what to know what Mat and Sappire are up to lol.

And wow...didn't think that Eric would go insane like that, and i didn't think he would be that type too...I know that mat is when rage over comes him, as he has done a fuck ton of bad shit in his life, and it was he killing anything in sight and a only friend died from being killed by the goverment, so yea lol i would like to see whi would win in a *who had the most fucked up life* LOL XD

...Mat...and Sapphire...little appearances...(whippers)...

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

...LOL just kidding lol, Dash and Eric need to have the spot light for awhile lol, and besides lol Mat and Sapphire are probley doing something big with Ganova and the Mansion...oh shit did i say that out loud. !_!

I cringed at the last part there, great chapter