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Guest chapter 11 . 6/9 I've read this story so many times that I could probably recite it to you. But I literally just saw your comment that said reviews make your day brighter. I guess we can see what my brain prioritizes. But nonetheless, thank you for the wonderful work of art. This story makes me smile each and every time I read it. On a bad day like today it's all I need to feel better. Thank you. Thank you so much. |
Adri117 chapter 6 . 4/23/2019 Beautiful! Great story! |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/4/2016 Well written, i could see it all as if i was watching a movie |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/4/2016 Who could it be than rowan/eli pope? |
Jasminegirl123 chapter 1 . 6/28/2016 Wow |
Jasminegirl123 chapter 13 . 6/2/2016 oooooohhh |
Jasminegirl123 chapter 12 . 6/2/2016 yep stand for your woman |
Jasminegirl123 chapter 9 . 6/2/2016 ohhhh |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/29/2016 Great writing, but sad that the baby will perish because someone intended harm olivia |
Guest chapter 8 . 3/29/2016 I think the person on other end was either mellie or someone close to whod have as much to lose by her loss of the whitehouse |
Guest chapter 13 . 12/21/2015 Fantastic twist, i surely thought the mastermind would've been Mellie, but someone close to her Did not enter my mind, but it does go to show how power hungry Mellie was and the one closest to her, would do something so horrible to secure her position as first lady; great writing snd thanks fir a story that held my interest |
Guest chapter 12 . 12/21/2015 Ok, so possessive, protective Fitz is back and i am sure there'll be hell to pay, cant wait for more, i think the person who ordered the hit is Mellie, because she has gotten wind that he maybe considering to leave her now that he's won the presidency and knowing how much she is drunk on power, she wanted his only distraction to be taken out of the picture; that way, she could remain first lady and not have to explain anything to her children plus there would be no news of his infidelity, just the unfortunate passing of his campaign fixer |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/21/2015 Well, i think you might just pulled it off, however how are you plan on handling the mellie and karen drama? |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/21/2015 Great recovery, shes not a selfish woman and was able to offer comfort in the face of such a tragedy; they will be fine together |
Guest chapter 9 . 12/21/2015 Wow, is all i can say, how the heck are you going to recover this?, fitz will be devastated that liv was injuered and the baby was lost!, but they are young and love each other and love survives right?please make it so that their lose diesnt totally destroy them, maybe this will prompt fitz to drop out of the race snd take liv home to recover and talk things through, together theyll figure out a way to handle Karen's insecurities, nelli's melodramatics and find a wy back to each other withe promise of getting together and planning for another baby down the line |