What is cliche is the stupid Civilian Council that doesn't exist at all and that the Hokage barely has any power. He is The Hokage, dictator and honestly, he put the village more in risk for letting the Civilians and every other idiot hunt Naruto down.

Sadly, like any other writer you go with the dumb, cliche that doesn't even exist in canon

I was mesmerized how well your plot spun the events. But I don't get the tail concept. This just makes it all the more difficult to blend and or be accepted or made Hokage.

Plz write more soon

God you even made Naruto an asshole.

NO!
Naruto without Orange, is the same ad Natsu without his scarf.

can't Naruto use a hoodie

I’m favoriting this solely because of the Gabriel Iglesias reference.

Naruto is a little bitch

Yeet

Pathetic.

this story so far is kinda dull... I mean. He is still not much of a sage. No fuinjutsu, no mention of genjutsu. His ninjutsu for the most part is limited to the academy level... MC should be WAY ahead. Also, Where are the kekkei Genkai. Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan, Wood Release... cmon!

Okay this is pretty good and I'm so interested in finding out what happens next so please update soon.

please update I'm really enjoying it and the humor you put in it

This is so good and I love how instead of bashing your actualy trying to make the charters more believable and friendly to each other and make Sakura someone who had a lot of potential in the beginning but wasted it into a good person

Oh my god I loved the idea of kyuubi turning spirt orchimaru into A even bigger moron then canon naruto