Amazing story... Well done

Really enjoyed this chapter actually! Your rendition of Jane here is spot on

Good that Jane is reaching out to Loki. I wonder how Thor will take it.

Guess they're going to Asgard! I hope they find a way to get returns though, would hate that poor Steve will lose his best friends

Loving Jane's firecracker personality and how she stands her own against everyone. Can't wait to read more!

Yay glad to see the rest of the team. Def intrigued by the bigger plot of the path through the universe, I hope you're planning on elaborating on that! And of course the baby too

Really enjoyed reading this! I'm sad there's not more Thor and Jane fics out there. Thanks for sharing! Will continue on for the baby stuff

Enjoyed the first chapter very much, I like your portrayal of Thor, you have captured him brilliantly!

LOVE!

OMG. Is all I could say. That's a tribute of how great this story is. If you can't tell, I'm a great Thor&Jane fan. What a chapter. A bit sad for Erik but overall happy for the couple. Oh and Captain America is such a darling! And Pepper too.

Oh. My. God. This is the best Thor&Jane fanfic ever. I am thoroughly giddy as a puppy, lol.

Thank you so much.

Not ususally a big fan of M ratings, but I love the story around those bits!

I just found recently discovered this fanfic, been a lurker for EVER. i never post reviews but had too this time, LOVE THIS freaking fic! couldn't get enough of it and was excited about the sequel! LOVE the M rating! couldn't get enough of it ;) just wanted to share that w/ya...

Love this story. Any deeply romantic stories involving Thor and Jane (and little rumbles of thunder) totally float my boat. I love that it was sexy in a non porno way too. I've had my fill of that and love me a bit of romance. Looking forward to reading about Thor's reaction next.

hi new reader! i was gonna review on the 1st chapter but i cudnt stop reading. just wanted to say THANK YOU for being the only person apparently...that can write a good Thor story. ive looked...they are all either, really poorly written or idiotic thor/loki slashes that r just...no. this story is really good! im loving it! feels like the real characters. the story line doesnt seem soo main stream. most wudnt have jane pegers till the end n u have it off the bat so thats deff different.

really excited to read this! hope u have more Thor stories!

take care!