*Whew* This is intense!

OH FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, DID YOU REALLY DECIDE TO MAKE SILVER AMON'S SISTER? WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? YOU HAVE COMPLETELY BUTCHERED EVERYTHING GOOD FANFICTION STANDS FOR!

Please, for the sake of anyone unfortunate enough to read this story fix this crap. You have done no research on the show you are writing on and quite frankly I can smell the teenage hormones THROUGH THE INTERNET PAGE!

OH, And SILVER WANTS TO WIN KORRA OVER EVEN THOUGH SHE HAS QUITE LITERALLY ONLY HAD TWO CONVERSATIONS WITH HER?

Wow, I simply cannot comprehend the level of insanity in this story.

Okay, as much as I really do not want to post a negative review about a story that clearly had a lot of effort put into it I find myself with a sudden suicidal disposition after reading this story. Not only are you completely destroying the lore by making it so that the first avatar is still alive but you named her silver. That is quite simply wrong.

Also, The explanation for how silver is still alive is quite frankly idiotic. Energy bending does not cover any of that explanation and even if it did it still wouldn't make much sense. Korra seems to forgive Silver for apparently taking away her bending in exactly three seconds. How is that supposed to make any sense according to the human psyche? You know, the thing that determines how our brains and emotions work?

The writing is horrible. Bland and drawling in most places and quick and not descriptive enough in others.

Oh, and Amon fights silver in the third chapter? THE THIRD CHAPTER? DO YOU HAVE NO CONCEPT OF BUILDUP AND SUSPENSE? I stopped reading after that but i take it that she absolutely thrashes him without any effort or damage taken on her part?

Don't even get me started on that "new side to the avatar state" stuff. You took the developed lore and canon and crapped on it, plain and simple. As much as i realize i sound like a huge asshole right now I really don't think this deserves the amount of reviews it got, Especially considering the fact that about half of them came from some idiot called "KorraSpanko"

I don't know if you know what a mary-sue is but Silver fits that description quite perfectly, if you feel like looking it up.

I have read many shitty stories in my time but this one takes the cake. I hope that you attempt to improve your writing. May whatever god (or lack-thereof) you worship have mercy on your soul.

You know this is really funny because you must have written this, and then season two came along and kind of screwed your oc over XD

Cannon avatar or not I'm still gonna read

would you consider not copying and pasting canon text, that would be really great? you don't have to include it in your story, just make references to it.
it's hella annoying to read blatantly copied material. I'm just gonna skip through it because i have no qualms with doing that, but yeah pls consider at least making it a bit original?

WOW 141 chapters I wish my story was this popular very well done BTW

It's not the best piece of literature out there, but it's alright I suppose.

This was freakin amazing omg I freakin loved this like what the hell man you and you're writing are just like wow . U are my 1# most favorite fanfiction and i'm serious about that. I LOVE THIS SO FREAKIN MUCH. I AM AT A LOSS OF WORDS TO SAY HOW MUCH I LOVE IT. ! Love it : )

This is so good already but when I read this I was like wtf everyones loving up on Korra. I was all like this is gonna be the most weird multiple people love way I ever seen

I like how completely nonsensical and elitist this thing is... Going to stop reading now. Buh-bye.

He is imprisoned

hey man great story i just finished chapter u post couple pairings n it gt me thinking why not why rekindle a lil romance between lin nd tenzin pm if u wanna talk more about it or just ur thoughts on it keep up da good work

coo; story

Congrats to Silver and Noatak.

This story is extremely interesting.