Okay, okay... now how do I put this into words? Oh, yeah!
ASDFGHJKL! THIS STORY... TIS AN EXTRODINARY PIECE OF WORK! Whyyyyyy does this not have more reviews!? It seems like some chapters didn't even HAVE reviews, there's 40 as of right now and 42 chapters!
But, this is incrediboo
- Vitalini, awesome character, very vividly descibed and I could almost hear a voice when she was speaking passionately. A bit mary sueish perhaps but that doesn't detract in the slightest for me. (Plus, her name came from Lion King 2 apparently which definitely qualifies for bonus points because Vitani was awesome)
- Loki. You got his stubborn assholeness captured, darling. And his positives as well. Swoon!
- FREAKIN. EMERYS. I swear, that end chapter was the most adorable fluffy thing i've read in a loong time.
- You MANAGED TO MAKE ME CRY! THREE TIMES! I can pretty much guarantee thats never happened before.
- The fact that this story is 193 000 words, which is equivilent to a 700-800 page book (I think, my math and google are not always up to scratch)
- This is the first time in about 8 months that i've posted a review with my actual account instead of being lazy and using guest mode.
THAT IS ALL, SENPAI. I WILL FIND YOU SEQUEL!

it was alright

Once you mention Tony, I got all fangirl xD

YES I LOVE H

Me: *unconscious*
Onyx: Great. She's still unconscious from reading the last chapter. Oh, and I was forced to read this whole bloody things by DE, and YOU NEVER SAID SHE WOULD DIE! ...Hel is Loki's daughter, right? Ok then, still a small chance. Just... killing her off is terrible! Everything falls apart! It's just... just... AGH! ...This is actually kind of ironic. DE and I read the last chapter and this one while listening to "Die Another Day." Either way, can't Vitalini die and then co,e back to life... well... permanently? *sigh* I hope Thanos does in the most painful way possible. I swear, of this is another one of those fanfics where EVERYONE DIES, I am gonna flip. Anyway, please update soon! The faster you update, the faster DE wakes up! Ciao, DragonEmerald and Onyx, King of Destruction

The Phoenix...very fitting :) Let's just hope she goes and kicks Thanos' sorry ass! lol And yeah, that seems to happen when you kill off a main character XD

Oh my gosh this is a amazing storie. Is vitalini really dead? I really really hope she isnt for good. Please update very soon im sad its almost over. Definitely one of my favorite stories on fanfic.

Addictive. This story is addictive. I've been reading it off and on all day while trying to get some stuff done. I can't wait to read the rest!

Is Thanos the thing at the end of The Avengers? I must admit I've always been a X-men girl, but thanks to the hotness of Loki, I'm trying to branch out!

I am in love with your story. I love it! I cant wait to read more. Please update soon! :)

I look forward to more, update soon!

Must... Sleep... Can't... Put down... Phone.

i seriously looooove this storie its so amazing! they way you write loki and your character, Vitalini, it's sooooo perfect along with every scene between the two. your doing an amazing job. Please update soon i want to know how everything turns out!

Oh man things are getting crazier every chapter. I hope everything turns out okay for them.

I cried when vitalini and Loki fought it was so emotional update please I am dying to now what comes next

As always I love what you've done! The conversation between Vitalini and Loki is almost this story's version of what one wishes to say to an ex or something... Like getting that victory of being able to tell the person how you feel and all! I am very interested for the battle sequence! Just a suggestion, use page breakers between sections of story where location changes and maybe between story and authors notes... But very nice!