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FINALLY! Something about Charles! I was going to ask about that if you all hadn't hit on that by the end of the season. :) so happy that you did. Not sure how I feel about the other Balcoins but overall this is a pretty decent continuation of the show. Def needs more editing, you can't get sleepily but you can get sleepy(tired would've been a good word to use too). And sometimes someone else's name is mentioned as saying something even though it's not that person talking. Needs work but I love the plot lines and I feel like this is the direction the show would've taken. :))

I have just finished reading this whole story and I cannot even begin to explain how intrigued I was with it. Amazing work to you and all your fellow writers and spell checkers. Amazing plot and amazing storyline. It was pretty long in some parts that I almost stopped, but I'm extremely glad I kept reading. I've read a handful of TSC fanfictions and there was only one other that I enjoyed immensly. I am about to go to Koritsune's page to start season 3 of TSC. I hope it's as good as season 2. I would like to see more in the future, but being as the show has long been cancelled, I wont hope too much. I really loved the series and I hated that it got cancelled after only one season with the amount of amazing potential that it had, so I've become a bit obsessed with the series leading me to read non stop fanfiction for it. Anyway, good work again on an amazing story.

hi

watch the show

Can i join

great script in fact amazing "nearly the end but the begining" "once evil can stay evil but change is nigh"

Really like this story, I've a huge Jake & Cassie fan so please keep that pairing, I know you need to add some drama but pleeease keep them together. Love Diana too maybe have her with a few people before she gets back to Adam. Keep writing, season 3 even if its only on Fanfiction.

It is amazing

** FIRST CORRECTION **

ORIGINAL (First line has confused Cassie and Jake's voices):

"Faye, don't tell me you're jealous that Jake and I dug up my father's grave to put his body in it because me and my sister killed him." Jake said.

"Yeah." Cassie agreed. "Because the dark, in a graveyard at night, with all the spooky noises and corpses and spiders is just so romantic."

CORRECTION (First suggestion):

"Faye, don't tell me you're jealous that Jake and I dug up my father's grave to put his body in it because me and my sister [or "my sister and I"] killed him." Cassie said.

"Yeah." Jake agreed. "Because the dark, in a graveyard at night, with all the spooky noises and corpses and spiders is just so romantic."

CORRECTION (Second suggestion):

"Faye, don't tell me you're jealous that Cassie and I dug up her father's grave to put his body in it because she and her sister killed him." Jake said.

** SECOND CORRECTION **

ORIGINAL (Spelling mistake "Dian"):

It had been wrong to abandon Cassie. Dian had known that from the start. It was just that the idea of being free for once, being able to make her own decisions and live her life had been too tempting...

CORRECTION:

It had been wrong to abandon Cassie. Diana had known that from the start. It was just that the idea of being free for once, being able to make her own decisions and live her life had been too tempting...

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So I just finished the show ( I'm a little late aren't i) and i wanted to know what happens next. Since there is no more episodes I turned to fanfiction and found your story. I am more than happy to say that your story is amazing even after the 1st chapter. I am going to keep reading till I'm caught up or until you decide to end. Can't wait!

little bit similar to the novel. fay's character, the link and all.. but have to admit this is much better than the novel. good job guys :D
i cant find the 3rd season. even the link doesn't work.