| Reviews for The Forbidden Love |
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BetterTitles chapter 12 . 3/20/2016 Hello there friend... I'm a person as you can see. I'm BetterTitles, an ex-member of the PJO fanbase. I've semi-rejoined mainly because I missed Perlia. I'm also a Beta, so I can help with the story. Sorry if I sound weird, I've just been rushing reviews as I hunt down the few good Perlia stories, desperately trying to cure myself of ungodly severe nostalgia attacks. Have a nice day. The story's great by the way! I can't wait for the next update. Again, have a nice day. PM me if you want any help with the story by the way. -BetterTitles |
Guest chapter 11 . 11/8/2015 Update please |
sexxy Bexxy chapter 4 . 1/5/2015 Woah broo, Why juniper is like one of Aphrodite ,and Grover is like a match maker?, and Grover and juniper is ooc |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/17/2014 Who is Marsia? |
Timeless Writing chapter 11 . 2/9/2014 I respect any decision you make! It'll be a bit disappointing to see this story end but if its for the best, then so be it! (• •) |
JustCrazy1 chapter 10 . 11/30/2013 Hey, your story is really good and I want to give you and suggestion since you're having a writer's block. After Percy stops her from being a huntress, their out in the woods. A monster comes running in the woods saying that they can't be together and tries to kill them. Percy tries to protect Thalia but right when the monster was about to stab Percy with it's claw, Thalia pushes him and ends up getting stabbed. Then they have a romantic moment while Percy heals her and Percy tells her to never try to get herself killed again. Thalia claims that she would do anything for him and Percy claims that that's what scares him the most. PLEASE GIVE IT A SHOT! YOUR AN AMAZING WRITER AND YOU CAN WRITE IT BETTER THAT i CAN! |
Timeless Writing chapter 10 . 11/21/2013 I'm really sorry for everything that has been going on recently, love. Stay strong! I'll keep supporting you, even if I don't say it! Know that for sure. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2013 Freaky! Other than that she is a demigod, blue eyes, and her name, Marisa Garcia describes me perfectly. Freakily perfectly. That is just weird. |
CherryBlueSlushie chapter 9 . 7/31/2013 Woah...I leave and you have like 2 new chapters! I should leave more often. :DD Hehe, anyways, AWESOME JOB! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
NotTelling Xyz chapter 3 . 7/12/2013 Hmm... its probably too late, but here you go. Name-Lykos (greek for wolf) Age-17 Appearance-Solid white eyes, no irises or pupils, same style hair as percy, but white, angular face, very pale skin Parent-Son of Hecate Weapon/Powers-Uses a dual knives made out of hydra teeth, has the power to manipulate animals, preferably wolves or hell hounds, the two daggers are called enkavma and kaio (burn and sear) Crush-Annabeth, he likes her smell. (will be explained) Hobbies-Sitting in dark corners, playing with wolves and his (normal size) pet hellhound, and thinking about Annabeth (usually occurs when he is in a dark corner) Personality-Dark, protective, caring towards his few friends, picks a lot of fights I really would like my character to become a main character but its yor choice... Clothes- An orange CHB shirt hidden by a drawstring black hoodie that says "Tartarus and back again" in big, red lettering, also wears grey jeans with black converse. Summary-Grew up in CHB, was a year rounder like Annabeth and she caught his eye after he smelled her, she smelled like wisdom, kindness, defiance, and bravery. (He smells peoples scents to judge their character) Other-A quarter of his mind acts like a wild animal, (i. e. Growls, etc. etc. etc.) |
Lunarstar042713 chapter 9 . 7/10/2013 I really do enjoy your stories, I just now got on fanfic. I've been busy too. Dont worry, even if u dont have as many people reading this as a few weeks ago, it's still fun to write, right? I've been a little lazy myself, Well bye, keep updating and make sure to eat lots of ice cream because I love ice cream! Bye :) |
Descending chapter 9 . 7/7/2013 I really like your story, but I have a question. Are you still doing the character of the week thing?" |
ItstheBookworm chapter 8 . 6/24/2013 he defiantly wont be happy |
Lunarstar042713 chapter 8 . 6/21/2013 Awesome, you updated. :D The only problem now is... I WANT TO READ MORE! Great story, I want to know what Zeus says to Percy. And I'm 14 too! |
Lunarstar042713 chapter 7 . 5/27/2013 AWWWWWW. ;( so sad, yet really great. I'm so glad that you updated. You don't disappoint, that's for sure! :D |