Owie. Sad face. The saddest face!

Wonderfully written, though I am now in dire need of reading some Liara fluff. :)

Oh, one thing I noticed, the sentence "I'll tell you anything you wish to know about Liara's condition under one condition" reads a bit odd. Maybe substitute one of the 'condition' for something else?

Nooooo! Liara :'( Hope she is alright . . .

The Spirit

Excellent, tense action here, really had me on the edge of my seat.

Damn that Kai Leng, I hate him so much. I'm currently thinking up a sufficiently nasty fate for him for my own story - I mean, stabbing seems too quick and clean for a bastard like him!

And now back to wringing my hands and hoping Shep and Liara will be okay... (oh yes, and hoping for another update soon :P)