| Reviews for Fallen Kingdom |
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afanoffanfics chapter 1 . 8/4 I used to rule the world chunks would load when I gave the word now every night I go stow away hide from the mobs I use to slay they once were terrified every time I looked into their eyes villages would cheer my way for the hero I was that's what theyd say one minute I had it all next our world began to fall away from all of that it once become they all cried for my help but I stood dead numb I gaze off into the boundless skyline note block choirs playing in the sunshine turn round pick up my sword and sheid the blade that once forced evil mobs to weild and hope one day that this chaos and destruction turns for the better never a bow in hand that was when I ruled the land it was the creepers and the skeletons blew down the doors and boxed us in arrows whizzing by like sreaked of light I tried all I could to stay and fight as the undead roamed the strret families broken at my feet life itself suspended by a thread oh why is it I wasn't dead I gaze off into the boundless skyline note block choirs playing in the sunshine turn round pick up my sword and sheid the blade that once forced evil mobs to weild and if this battle should leave me slain I know herobrine will call my name better than to take a stand that was when I ruled the land I gaze offi into the boundless skyline note block choirs playing in the sunshine turn round pick up my sword and shield the balde that once forced evil mobs to weild and if this battle should leave me slain I know herobrine will call my name better than to take a stand that was when I ruled the land sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad but love the song so much I can sing it off by heart |
afanoffanfics chapter 1 . 8/4 love idea. plz write the quadrilody |
Korgeta chapter 1 . 3/12/2017 I'm honestly surprised by the quality and the time to bring up your own lore to life within the game of minecraft. The last did have some real tension thrown in and the ending I felt was satisfactory in it's own way. Would have liked somespeculation as to why the mysterious person attacked the castle and the monster horade in. Still I think this was quite a good piece. |
TinyMinuet chapter 1 . 11/20/2015 Yes. just. yes. great job :) |
Skipper S Patton chapter 1 . 7/7/2015 Write one based off of Take Back the Night. |
Dwebble chapter 1 . 3/22/2015 Wow i cri eri time m dick is throbbing m8 pls no hurt i r8 10/100000000000000000 cuz this is gud m8 i liek the way yu fergit |
TheGoldenArrow chapter 1 . 7/19/2014 i have always loved this story and i couldn't put it in a better way it is great |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 Update it with the little kids story in take back the night |
Matheen chapter 1 . 6/2/2013 Why did the king die |
WOOT chapter 1 . 3/6/2013 pretty good and sad story |
Lysander chapter 1 . 3/3/2013 It is based off a true story in the 10 century or younger a small kingdom was invaded and the kings wife and son were torn apart from blades |
King Sub'muloc chapter 1 . 2/2/2013 I am going to make a story about a king of a great kingdom whitch fell by the sawns of evil and trying to take back for what is left of his great kingdom and his people and having to not only fight evil, but also the shame and loss of his honor and pride, and to free his wife and children from the man who is responsible for this terrible tragedy(The cloaked man who blew up the wall), his father and former king, King Paolo Dal'pozzo Toscanelli! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2013 i started to cry a little. your story(and the video)are so sad... |
Mia- Hatsune chapter 1 . 11/30/2012 I love your story |
yo chapter 1 . 11/28/2012 looooove it |