Reviews for Fallen Kingdom
afanoffanfics chapter 1 . 8/4
I used to rule the world
chunks would load when I gave the word
now every night I go stow away
hide from the mobs I use to slay
they once were terrified
every time I looked into their eyes
villages would cheer my way
for the hero I was that's what theyd say
one minute I had it all
next our world began to fall
away from all of that it once become
they all cried for my help but I stood dead numb

I gaze off into the boundless skyline
note block choirs playing in the sunshine
turn round pick up my sword and sheid
the blade that once forced evil mobs to weild
and hope one day that this chaos and
destruction turns for the better
never a bow in hand

that was when I ruled the land
it was the creepers and the skeletons
blew down the doors and boxed us in
arrows whizzing by like sreaked of light
I tried all I could to stay and fight
as the undead roamed the strret
families broken at my feet
life itself suspended by a thread
oh why is it I wasn't dead

I gaze off into the boundless skyline
note block choirs playing in the sunshine
turn round pick up my sword and sheid
the blade that once forced evil mobs to weild
and if this battle should leave me slain
I know herobrine will call my name
better than to take a stand
that was when I ruled the land

I gaze offi into the boundless skyline
note block choirs playing in the sunshine
turn round pick up my sword and shield
the balde that once forced evil mobs to weild
and if this battle should leave me slain
I know herobrine will call my name
better than to take a stand
that was when I ruled the land

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad but love the song so much I can sing it off by heart
afanoffanfics chapter 1 . 8/4
love idea. plz write the quadrilody
Korgeta chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
I'm honestly surprised by the quality and the time to bring up your own lore to life within the game of minecraft. The last did have some real tension thrown in and the ending I felt was satisfactory in it's own way. Would have liked somespeculation as to why the mysterious person attacked the castle and the monster horade in. Still I think this was quite a good piece.
TinyMinuet chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
Yes. just. yes.

great job :)
Skipper S Patton chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Write one based off of Take Back the Night.
Dwebble chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Wow i cri eri time m dick is throbbing m8 pls no hurt i r8 10/100000000000000000 cuz this is gud m8 i liek the way yu fergit
TheGoldenArrow chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
i have always loved this story and i couldn't put it in a better way it is great
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Update it with the little kids story in take back the night
Matheen chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Why did the king die
WOOT chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
pretty good and sad story
Lysander chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
It is based off a true story in the 10 century or younger a small kingdom was invaded and the kings wife and son were torn apart from blades
King Sub'muloc chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
I am going to make a story about a king of a great kingdom whitch fell by the sawns of evil and trying to take back for what is left of his great kingdom and his people and having to not only fight evil, but also the shame and loss of his honor and pride, and to free his wife and children from the man who is responsible for this terrible tragedy(The cloaked man who blew up the wall), his father and former king, King Paolo Dal'pozzo Toscanelli!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
i started to cry a little. your story(and the video)are so sad...
Mia- Hatsune chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
I love your story
yo chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
looooove it
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