Keep Writing!

Please continue!
I really like the beginning, please please please continue!
Maybe a bit more information could have been good but I liked it all the same!

I'm excited to so where you go with this. Just a hint of advice; a bit more description would be nice and maybe a wider variety of words. Keep up the good work though!

I like this story... please continue it. I'm intrigued as to what is going to happen. I sooooo want James to be the bachelor.

I like it so far! Maybe a little more description, a little more meat on the bones so to say...I like the idea though! Can't wait for chapter two. And to find out what happened in high school with James and Lily...

nice start! please keep writing!

please keep writing! it seems like its off to such a good start!

Is the next chapter going to be in third person-James? i want to see what he thinks :) like how he doesn't want to be on it but Sirius convinces him

anyway

keep writing!