Liked how you used biotics as a rebuttal for Shepard still being human, I never would've thought of that

Story was nice, but if I may be so honest, not fantastic. But the ending, however, was very very good.

Holy crap this was well written and very deep. The conversation in the shuttle was serious and yet ended on a lighter note and all reasonable emotions were displayed, I really like it. And then with the synthesis ending the majority of the story becomes simply a memory, Kudos, this is an amazing one-shot!