Niiiicccceee...warm and wonderful and SO satisfying. Thank you for this!

awesome

Good but bad ending

Yayayayayayay! The feelz tho! Love it!

Wow awesome! Can you write more or is this a one-shot?

Oh, how sweet! I really like the emotion here. The dialogue was so heartfelt. Nice work!

Loved the line from the princess diaries. Lol

Please please please please write more!

awsome!

I wish they hadn't killed Graham of the show! They were perfect for each other! You did a GREAT job! Please write more!

This is great!
Though I do think she will have to take that shower before any marriage takes place, and her parents probably will want to be present for that.
This was great!
Short, easy, and so very romantic!
I love it!

Once again, another cute fic :)

I think in this one though, the sentences got a little long at some points. So I got kinda lost when I was reading and had to read some sentences over, and that kinda interferes with the flow of the fic. So just watch out for that :)

Other than that, I really liked it! Really sweet moment and I LOVE this pairing x) Especially loved the ending; just like Emma to take the reigns on the relationship :P

Keep up the awesome work!

Jelly.

*falls over laughing at the ending*

.:Hailey-Stone, yo:.

Heyy, I liked your story a lot. It was a very interesting idea, it was all together pretty orginal and I truely hope that they do bring Graham back one way or another.

Still I would like to point a few things out...

One thing that kinda irked me about the ending was "wanna get married?" - This seemed sudden and ubrupt and very juvienile. True love or not it would just be very awkward for a sudden, "Hey Graham, I was thinking... since you died I wished I had married you. So now that you're back..." Again, great story but I would suggest switching the ending with something a little more subtle and soft something more romantic than just a random 'wanna get married'.

Also it feels to me like this is a little choppy. For example, "Emma chuckled. Her mother was Snow White. And her father was Prince Charming." it didn't need all those periods and you're not supposed to start sentences off with "and" or "but" so I would suggest something more along the lines of, "Emma chuckled at the thought of two of her close friends were actually her parents, Snow White and Prince Charming. The idea was simply unreal to her, but it something that her son had been trying to convince her of for over a year maybe it was time to open her mind."

Stories like this that involve inner thouoghts and feelings need to be a little more in depth and detailed, it's not bad to have longer sentences or paragraphs - don't worry it doesn't make it boring it just makes it easier for the readers to really get into the story and the characters mind. Isn't that the job of the writers?

So you have really great ideas and a great general idea for the correct format so that's great. I'm not saying any of this to tear you down - I'm not flaming. I just see potential and I want to see you go the next step.

Just a couple ideas, keep writing and I hope to see more from you soon.

There's can't be enough ws in awwwwwwwwww for what this story represents. Great work! I absolutely love it and laughed at the end.

The Outlaw Witch