Reviews for Unexpected
Pj chapter 1 . 6/15
I love this so much the best Cheshire x Roy fix there is
Wow thank u chapter 1 . 7/7/2017
That was amazing seriously you deserve an award for this! I have read a lot of fanfiction and I honestly believe this is one of the best I look up too u! Please, write more stories! Do u understand how many stories I have read? This is genuis️️️️this is great. You are the greatest. Don't lose hope
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2017
You did not mess with their characterisation to much
u r awesome chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
Awwww. I loved it! I agree with your AN about neither saying it, but expressing it instead. Still this fic was marvelous. I enjoyed reading it!

u r awesome
Madi Starlight chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
I laughed at the part when Chesh was all "I don't care what you and my sister do in your spare time." Shame on her, lol. Comedy gold. Overall the fic was very well written. I thought the characterizations were really great. On the contrary to the note at the end, I can actually see Roy outright letting it slip that he loves her. Eventually. And I liked the whole perspective you put on their relationship. Great job!
SkyyWriter14 chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
Your characterization of Jade and Roy were exactly how they are in both the comics and show! This fanfiction is amazing and I really liked how it was Jade's POV and how Roy was the first to initiate the "I love you." I do feel he would be the one to say it first than Jade because of both their past. Anyway, I loved this fic. It was overall excellent! Go Cheshroy and I really did wish there were more fanfics written about them.
Element Siren chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
Love it
Bookworm85 chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
I don't really ship Roy and Jade, but this fic might be what changes my mind. Nice writing!
babyvfan chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
Awwwww. And I completely agree with you. I think it's why they worked so well together. They understand each other in ways no one else can
robinfan99 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
I love jade and roy together!
JD SPARKS chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
I loved this. Great fic! I agree with your comment on neither Roy or Jade being the "I love you" types, but I think you did it really well! I was totally taken in, and I enjoy your writing style. I'll definitely be checking out more of your work!
partlysunny chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
This is literally exactly how i imagined their relationship going. And you got Jade down to a T, great job with this fic. Thank you!
MungoJerry chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Tee hee
I just started watching Young Justice, and- forgive me- but I totally wiki'd and skipped around JUST because I wanted to know what happened to these two. The Lone Mama-Wolf and Cub thing just clinched it for me. These guys are my FAVORITE part of YJ. (Probably because they're my nascent escapist romantic fantasy thrust into my face on a silver platter. GOOD GRAVY. I need some tea. Or something.)

ANYway, nicely done! I thought you kept them very in character, and you've fulfilled my wish of knowing HOW that happened, because frankly I felt a bit robbed. Great imagery, too.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
This made my day.
MTBlack chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Yes, it's perfect. As before, I think you've really captured Cheshire on your own way. I think I'm in love with this fic.
It was fluffy without being fluffy, so adorable. It was even funny, nah, definitely this is my favourite oneshot of yours ever. I want more, haha, need more.

I agree with neither of them saying i love you or things like that, although I can see Roy being more affectionate of the two, even though he has a bit of a more complicated baggage that she does in the end. Something like taking the chance of what life gives him, after Jade yelling him to do it so, sorry for the rant, again, jaja your fics make me think.

Thanks for sharing it! :D
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