This has to be one of the best if not the best Lin/Tenzin fanfictions out there. I really love how you wrote both of them. It was perfect. This really fits perfectly into the story. I had a feeling the story this could have been a situation or that she couldn't have kids and didn't want to tell Tenzin the truth so she said she didn't want them.

Beautiful writing. You really captured the characters' emotions, as well as nailed their personalities.
All in all, amazing job :)

Uhu. I'm gonna name you heartbreaker. (Love this idea though)

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

YES HEADCANON ACCEPTED.

Well, actually my own headcanon is that Tenzin was set on producing lots of airbabies and Lin just wasn't up for it and that's why they drifted apart, but this is also a cool thought. And now I totally understand your other fic too.. I think. So, like, Lin's jogging all around the island but then she gets pregnant and stops and then starts again but then she miscarries and that's the end of it all, or something like that?

I'm not a very smart person, so at first I was a bit confused when Toph asked Lin if she was alone and shes just like 'nah', I had to stop and think, til I understood it and went 'awwww'. I really liked how the miscarriage was described, it felt very real. Also, my heart is now broken into billions of pieces, thank you very much.

Jesus that was fricken tearbending material right there *wipes eyes*

I enjoy this. I enjoy your writing. I enjoy your ideas. I enjoy having something as heartrending as this to cry over.

Poor Lin. I hope I never have to experience that. No one should.

oh my god i am literally in tears. my mother had a miscarriage about two years after i was born but she told me the story and told it many times and this...is how she felt. you captured it completely. so beautiful, so sad. i feel so sorry for lin

awww, oh no. POOR LIN!
We really really need to find out what really happened to their relationship!

This is heartbreaking. Poor Lin..

So terribly sad. :,(

Very well written and needs a load of more reviews.

What a terribly sad story. Beautifully written and definitely a masterpiece. I wish you had more reviews.

Keep up the good work.

:,(

So sad but beautfully written!

This story is just beautiful. I read it twice to myself and once to my friend. It still makes my heart weep.