Nicely done, as usual. Sorry I didn't review the last chapter... could've sworn I did, but whatever.
So, not much has changed in the last few chapters, I guess, except Black getting used to the daily routine of the asylum. Seems kind of drawn out if you ask me, but, if you don't mind, could I ask a question?
Why is Xlesa in this again? And I don't remember Athena and... I forget the other lady's name, but I don't remember them dying in a fire. I remember the thing about Reshiram, but...

This is why (A The system doesn't work and (B I'm a Vigilante, an E-Vigilante

I love this story will it be possible to update more often

I'm not even going to lie. I did know Xlesa was going to be in here, but I still had a little fangirl attack. xD

I think Xlesa is in character, Athena too. I just can't wait to see how Black meets the alter that ruined that room. That one is pretty interesting.

uh yes you are crazy...just saying

So this is the 'Screams' FanFic. *Nods* I like it. It's a lot darker than the stuff I normally read, but why not read it? Poor Black. No one believes his weird, yet true story. But at least he'll have some company.

Omg black is in the loony thingy will he be kept in a straight jacket? LOL

Haha I knew the name Darius was somehow connected to darcia!

1st: Everybody knows? I have to blurt it out then! It's Sabrina. Eat it and love it everyone! If it's not... well, you might as well leave me with black.
2nd: Damn. That is one psycho nuts girl... when she first made white watch the show ten times, I was wondering, why this is M for torture if this is my everyday life?
But that was until... later. So yes, keep going, and please say that White losing was just a dream too! Otherwise, I'm just plain freaked out.

This story scared the he'll outta me!

Oh God Apollo... Can you please put me in there!
I wanna have a little talk to our resident 'Sachiko'

Apollo, those were awesome chapters! I liked how you added every bit of detail on the battle against that boy. The name between Darius and Darcia (kinda forgot the name) was a little obvious to me that they might be siblings, and I also liked the suspense and action on the story and Darcia also has a great personality, where she looks like an innocent little girl, but so far as I've seen from the fire has great power. I may be rambling a bit, but overall I loved the story a ton! Good job! ;)

-Koopaling Lover Girl (Selena Brown)

Hmm... I kind of see where this is going. And, I think I know exactly who that little girl is. It's unmistakable! I guess I shouldn't say for the fact of the other readers...

Well, obviously everyone is enjoying! inclucing me. This chapter wasn't as... horrorish, but I can see it coming. And a lot of adventure parts I can predict, too. Stay on the right path, and you'll do great!

Wow, what a crazy and frightening little girl! Another good chapter Apollo! Poor Black, do I sense a hint of feelings for White? I can't wait to get to the make his life a living hell part!

O_O jk... Not creepy enough! More, More! I want some form of Raep in this, and blood, lots and lots of blood. DO. IT. NOW. Or else...