Excellent! Love this! Hot Hot Hot!

This lovely, sexy bar story was great. For your first lemon writing, it sure was steamy. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.

Great story

Very good one-shot, nice lemon too! :)

love love loooooovvvveee! so hot and soooo fun. i was seriously sad when i got to the end... please continue theirvstory! you rock my socks baby3

Holy sugar honey iced tea! AMAZING! I am so glad I read this. Very hot! :) More?

That was sexy

* •. ❤❤. • *LOVED IT* •. ❤❤. • *

I Like this, it was hot. I like the story behind it too. Good job!

awesome job!

They both love Nickelback? These idiots deserve each other. :p

as long as alice is 18, she is ok to work at the bar, but edward should not let her drink tequila, she is still under the legal drinking age. as an older brother and most importantly a bar owner, he needs to be more responsable.

the lemon was hot, loved edward and bella.

I loved this story and i really think you should write more... i want to know what happens next (_)

Much love and respect

Xoxo

Mia

That was so HOT! Loved the story! For a first lemon also, that was pretty darn awesome! Good job! :D

The best one shot ever! Loved every word of it!