Reviews for Soul
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12
Personally I don't think it's too bad could definitely be better I really got confused cuz you said Fusion ha in the beginning beginning and then it was bleach I really thought this is going to be a Dragon Ball Naruto crossover fanfiction but it was a bleach one
dheathking4821 chapter 8 . 6/23
Awww so this end ?
Kazzmikae334 chapter 1 . 2/4
when are you going to update this story
Guest chapter 3 . 10/23/2019
great and i just started enjoying this novel, then you have to put the worst shit ever created in this novel, fucking traveler from the future with bullshit reason to give out bullshit knowledge turning this novel into one big bullshit thank you for these 2 and half chapters of enjoyable reading material thou.
KonekoBlack chapter 2 . 10/22/2019
I'm going to put my criticism in now this chapter was bull not only does he not want to destroy the village some mystery girl shows up to stray him from his own path
zero fullbuster chapter 1 . 10/10/2019
what a bunch of crap. the story is extremely lame and crap.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/31/2019
The fuck is this? I'm Okay with crossover as long as it blends well with the main series, but this shit come on this is like blending oil with water
Author you are weak and pathetic
jangoman1579 chapter 1 . 6/12/2019
I seriously hate most Neglect fics. And sadly this is showing all the signs of most of the bad ones.

1) you can't get as strong as you are trying to make him with him still being 7. Being intermediate in Fuinjutsu is impossible considering the complexity of the art.
2) I say this all the time, Kushina and Minato would NEVER neglect one of their children KNOWINGLY. It makes it so unrealistic when you have his parents PURPOSELY ignore him for Mito but now they want to be all attention giving. That's not how it works. If they purposely forget about him beyond him just living at home they can't just one day decide to pay attention to him in a good way.
3) For two people working on this I find the writing sub par. Every time a new person speaks you start a new line. I don't feel any emotion coming from anyone really in this first chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 6/9/2019
Type your review a weak a useless naruto
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 1 . 3/25/2019
the fuck
guest chapter 8 . 12/10/2018
i love it please update more chapters
i want to fine out what happens at the falls of truth
Guest chapter 9 . 11/18/2018
dear writer please make more chapters
NaruAi2018 chapter 8 . 10/30/2018
I would rate it as illegal fucking shit outta whore!
Brandon Boodoo chapter 3 . 10/27/2018
PURE SHIT!
Avaricious Kurobara chapter 1 . 9/12/2018
its Hogyoku
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