Reviews for All the Cards Fall
she.a.punk chapter 15 . 11/14/2019
I was kind of trepedatious of how you would end this, but the ending was actually perfect. Mike not wanting to work in the bullpen and Harvey understanding that without him having to say it...that was really good. Spoke volumes.

Really good fic.

Punk
she.a.punk chapter 14 . 11/14/2019
Aww, they're working through it and Louis...poor Louis. I can't believe there's only one more!

Punk
she.a.punk chapter 13 . 11/14/2019
Ha, I like Lucas. He had really good advice for Harvey. I'm starting to get concerned about Mike though. I understand why Donna is mostly okay, and we all know Harvey isn't, but Mike? I'm starting to get worried about that boy's mental health.

Punk
she.a.punk chapter 12 . 11/14/2019
Man, everything is just boiling like right below the surface. BUt...how do you come back from something like this? How do you go back to that place? So crazy. I'm looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.

Punk
she.a.punk chapter 11 . 11/14/2019
THe kiss. Unnnngghh.. There was something so intimate and quiet about this scene. I imagined every word being whispered...what is it about the dark that makes us be so honest? God that was beautiful.

And you said there wouldn't be time for romance. Pishaww.

Punk
she.a.punk chapter 10 . 11/14/2019
Hi! It's me! Back to finish reading this fic like 7 years later. I really am loving the way you're crafting the relationship between these characters. The way all their emotional walls are kind of a mess and they're just trying to keep going. I'm looking forward to seeing what Angst lies before us!

Punk
Guest chapter 5 . 3/9/2015
What happened to Harvey's hand? When you had him saving Mike his hand got injured by the gun, but after that it was fine. Did you forget about it?
marthapreston4 chapter 5 . 2/5/2015
the public arena comments are a litttle wierd they were just shot at public appearance be damned
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 2/5/2015
Holy crap on a cracker you had me when harvey went for donna and mike but that ending there means I have to keep reading
weemcg33 chapter 15 . 12/16/2014
I really loved this, so well written and I think you captured all the characters really well. Especially given the circumstances.
katesari chapter 15 . 8/28/2014
Real good! Enjoyed reading, even though the subject was of a less enjoyable nature!
But like I said very good, well written too. Going to check out other stories of yours this weekend.
Bye
wotumba1 chapter 15 . 5/27/2014
great story, loved it!
wotumba1 chapter 12 . 5/27/2014
they need to work through their trauma first. so maybe yes, going back to work then will likely be too soon...
wotumba1 chapter 9 . 5/27/2014
it had to catch up with harvey sometime...
wotumba1 chapter 8 . 5/27/2014
yes! mike's awake
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