| Reviews for All the Cards Fall |
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she.a.punk chapter 15 . 11/14/2019 I was kind of trepedatious of how you would end this, but the ending was actually perfect. Mike not wanting to work in the bullpen and Harvey understanding that without him having to say it...that was really good. Spoke volumes. Really good fic. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 14 . 11/14/2019 Aww, they're working through it and Louis...poor Louis. I can't believe there's only one more! Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 13 . 11/14/2019 Ha, I like Lucas. He had really good advice for Harvey. I'm starting to get concerned about Mike though. I understand why Donna is mostly okay, and we all know Harvey isn't, but Mike? I'm starting to get worried about that boy's mental health. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 12 . 11/14/2019 Man, everything is just boiling like right below the surface. BUt...how do you come back from something like this? How do you go back to that place? So crazy. I'm looking forward to seeing how this all plays out. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 11 . 11/14/2019 THe kiss. Unnnngghh.. There was something so intimate and quiet about this scene. I imagined every word being whispered...what is it about the dark that makes us be so honest? God that was beautiful. And you said there wouldn't be time for romance. Pishaww. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 10 . 11/14/2019 Hi! It's me! Back to finish reading this fic like 7 years later. I really am loving the way you're crafting the relationship between these characters. The way all their emotional walls are kind of a mess and they're just trying to keep going. I'm looking forward to seeing what Angst lies before us! Punk |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/9/2015 What happened to Harvey's hand? When you had him saving Mike his hand got injured by the gun, but after that it was fine. Did you forget about it? |
marthapreston4 chapter 5 . 2/5/2015 the public arena comments are a litttle wierd they were just shot at public appearance be damned |
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 2/5/2015 Holy crap on a cracker you had me when harvey went for donna and mike but that ending there means I have to keep reading |
weemcg33 chapter 15 . 12/16/2014 I really loved this, so well written and I think you captured all the characters really well. Especially given the circumstances. |
katesari chapter 15 . 8/28/2014 Real good! Enjoyed reading, even though the subject was of a less enjoyable nature! But like I said very good, well written too. Going to check out other stories of yours this weekend. Bye |
wotumba1 chapter 15 . 5/27/2014 great story, loved it! |
wotumba1 chapter 12 . 5/27/2014 they need to work through their trauma first. so maybe yes, going back to work then will likely be too soon... |
wotumba1 chapter 9 . 5/27/2014 it had to catch up with harvey sometime... |
wotumba1 chapter 8 . 5/27/2014 yes! mike's awake |