Kyoya is ooc

That was good love it

Can you do something like that by adding Mori?

I love that she took control of the situation originally. It's rare to find a story where he's the one giving up any control. It was a nice change if pace )

~Tori

Oh fuckity fuck. That was soooo hot!

Well that's an... interesting way to treat intimacy. Very good story.

Oh...how much I wish he was mine!

You think friends with benefits then the you'll break my heart and then it's love.

One word: Nice :3

wait I thought she was eating rayman when he knocked not in the bathroom

was she eating wile on the loo?

I'm in love with this story!
I love love it!
It was simply amazing!

This was nice - it's a plausible turn of events, you kept them in character to a decent degree, and it was kinda fun to see Haruhi turn the tables on Kyouya like that. The writing was a tiny bit on the rough side, but all in all, I rather liked it.

*nods* Quite true.
I did enjoy the story, especially how Haruhi managed to throw Kyoya out of control! XD

This scene has happened before in real life! Not just stories or movies!

Hello there! I just wanted to say that I very much like your story, but there was one little thing that had made me crack up quite a bit...

"With that she unzipped his pants and pulled out her penis, stroking it gently. "You have any protection?""

This had got to be one of the best errors ever! I was so close to not even mentioning at all, haha. I love your story very much, and you should think about basing a story off of this. I would definitely follow you if you did.

Continue to be awesome!

perfect ending line