| Reviews for Baby Beel's First Words |
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madoka chapter 1 . 9/2/2014 I love how they're so their characters! I love the Oga's family number 2 too hee hee |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2013 Lmao! |
DragonHalf chapter 1 . 6/8/2012 Awesome! |
lil'chrome-chan chapter 1 . 5/26/2012 This fic is so freakin' funny for God's sake! I can't stop grinning and laughing the whole way till the end! This is one of the best OgaxHilda fic here! Please write more about this love-hate couple! I beg you! |
hiatuzzz chapter 1 . 5/26/2012 Lol it's kinda funny, I like it xD Looking forward to read more :)) happy weekend x |
Amamimon chapter 1 . 5/26/2012 What a nice way for a 9-months baby's to say his first words. But it's Beelzebub we're talking about, anyway. Damn, hell, dumb, shit, bitch...That oddly fine with me. It's not like you have put the f-word or any words that have the same level with it. I'm sorry if you didn't satisfied with this review, cause I haven't read the second chapter yet. Is the romance really blossoming between Oga and Hilda? Well, good work for you, Sasha-chan! |
Read Love and Review chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 I gotta say that the story is cute! :) Tee hee! Now, write another OgaxHilda pleaseee? :3 -xoxo |
Takagi Akito chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 funny as hell and great plot! i have to say that i think your writing style is really fit on beelzebub! |
Kitake Neru chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 The plot is amusing! I figured Baby Belze WOULD copy Tatsumi, wouldn't he? LOL. Now for some constructive notes: Do pay attention to grammar, especially sentence structures. A good story can easily be spoiled by bad sentence structuring. That said, I think you'll be fine with practice Good job! |
pinksamuri1014 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 :) it was funny! |
sakukukuku chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 AWESOME! You totally put the character OC! Good job and I truly hope you write more Beelzebub's fanfics! |
Rocky9999 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 Haha reepichiii daaacheee! |