Just use grammarly.

is this dead

The most glaring issue is your grammar. When you have a new person speak, you need to start a new paragraph. It's ok if your "paragraph" is only one sentence with the person speaking, just so long as the entire thing isn't like that. But, from what you've written here that won't be an issue.

loving it

Thanks

You could get grammarly it helps me write papers.

Looking forward to seeing your work again. I'm super happy you're still around kicking and breathing.

Almost four years rip

Bleach been over for awhile

Utterly bullshit.

Ok I wasn't convinced before because maybe I was just skimming too fast or not paying enough attention, but this is very hard to read and/or follow at many points. Words are missing or incorrect, connecting sentences are just missing, etc.

Characters seem... off.

Character motivations seem to come and go based on whats convenient for a scene to happen.

There's a lot of contrivance and just I don't know man.

Its kinda pretty bad.

Obviously this is dead, so I don't know if this will find you, but have a wonderful day.

Pathetic disgusting and retarded good job with coming up with this combination by the way please go learn some grammar.

And I really doubt that Tsukiumi is compatible with Ichigo, however for the sake of your story, I guess you can twist however much you want it to.

Just curious, but where's Karabusa at this stage?

Epic story keep it up!