| Reviews for Bitter Beginnings |
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   Teenwolfislyfe chapter 2 . 3/20/2018 To help( if you want) i have a few tips for writing thors dialogue big and full words no slang put an exclamation mark except when thors being sad or other emotions use words like fell and gulped ,use words liie plummeted ,swallowed |
| Merlin-Herondale chapter 8 . 7/30/2015 This story is incredible. Perfect in every sense of the word. I'll definitely be re reading this one sooner or later. Amazing! |
| Nicolene B chapter 8 . 5/22/2015 Really enjoyed this story |
| thingsthatmakeme chapter 8 . 10/24/2014 Great story! So cute and fluffy - so many feels! |
| thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 4 . 7/10/2014 Aweeeeeeee awesome job |
| thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 3 . 7/10/2014 Nawwwwwww great job |
| thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 1 . 7/10/2014 Wowe amazing start like it |
| majestic.beauty.sealed.in.ice chapter 8 . 2/17/2014 Omg! Awesome! Job! Loved that u combined both of these genres to make a fantastic fic! Thanks sooo much for sharing I enjoyed it tons! |
| phoenix8351 chapter 8 . 1/23/2013 really love it |
| Cookie-the-Rookie chapter 8 . 12/21/2012 I loved this story! Tony's reaction with the pole was intresting, though it doesn't make sense how it got there. Overall, great story! |
| x0xalexis8 chapter 8 . 11/26/2012 I love it! This was drama mixed with fluffyness |
| Mariposadelaluna chapter 7 . 10/6/2012 (Review for whole story but I already left one so this is here instead) I neeed mooerrre! Where's the sequel?! |
| Mariposadelaluna chapter 8 . 10/6/2012 This story was so awesome! It had everything I love about these two & the rest! I'm off to read the rest of what you have in this universe! |
| Mariposadelaluna chapter 6 . 10/6/2012 Tortured!Steve was so heartbreaking! But I love how this chapter ended! Great story :oD |
| Bakura From School chapter 1 . 9/28/2012 The only thing I'm more excited about than reading the second chpater, is the fact that this story is complete! I love good complete stories. the writing is wonderful. very descriptive, but not painfully so. ...man i'm so excited to read this, but sadly, i'll have to wait till morning...well until i wake up. (please don't get mad at my lack of capitals...they're hurting me too. but I'm a little too lazy to stretch to the shift key right now...hurts my wrist. ) |
