...oh man he needs to go to the Gurnee park. Which I used to be able to see from my house.

I warned you about those loops dawg. I told you man.

But why haven't you continued this! It's so sweet and cool! :B Actually. I like the way you put Rose's personality and the way she deal witht the oh so cool Dave. And that egderpy john is so cute 3 Jade is cool too. Please continue it, for sweet Jegus troll sake, yeah? :33

Poor dave!

AH this story has so much potential! please keep writing it!

M'God how is Dave gonna avoid EVERY. SINGLE. RIDE?

Especially without John and Jade not catching on? This is going to be interesting...

Yes, John is an adorable derp. Your fic is funny so far and I'm curious as twhat the angst might be.

...If that's supposed to be Eq, where's Nepeta? (0.0)?

Wow this is still really great and i need to see daves thoughts while on rides pretty please omg

PLEASE MORE

This is freaking amazing and funny and OMG I love it!

(And how far away from LA is Magic Mountain? I've never been there before...)

Oh my gog, thisss issss beautiful.

Sheer perfection. I giggled through out the whole thing. xD I hope you are planning on updating sssoon? Pleassse do :D

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Ahhh omg this is perfect.