| Reviews for Coming Together |
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Deno chapter 21 . 7/18/2018 This is an adorable story |
buterflypuss chapter 21 . 4/4/2017 interesting |
BlueFireMoon chapter 20 . 7/18/2013 please make more I would 3 to read more please this story is really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really great so please make more. |
nolongerexists394 chapter 20 . 6/16/2013 brilliant. if you wanted to add some angst what about having Harry have a nightmare about losing Sev or something similar? P.S. I would have a beta-reader look this over it's good but there are a few little things that need tweaking |
nolongerexists394 chapter 3 . 6/16/2013 great but slytherin doesn't have an e on the end. |
nolongerexists394 chapter 2 . 6/16/2013 great chapter one tiny thing though heroin is the drug heroine is the word for a female hero (in some places it's no longer used because hero can be unisex) |
nolongerexists394 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013 brilliant! |
bkerrmom1 chapter 20 . 6/8/2013 Sweet! |
NoOne425454 chapter 20 . 6/7/2013 Great chapter. I hope Sev doesn't freak if Harry tells him he loves him. Can't wait for more. |
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 20 . 6/7/2013 love it :). |
Tsyilna Llyria chapter 20 . 6/7/2013 Aww i can totally see Severus reading Romeo and Juliet and harry being like that |
Tsyilna Llyria chapter 19 . 5/27/2013 Aww these last 3 chapters have been very sweet and i like it. The date would have to be my fav though. Lol love the sexual tension, maybe some teasing while they are around the school like during dinner or something idk :) |
lariqueniasexiboricua90 chapter 19 . 5/27/2013 wow, this chapter is super sexy and sensual. I love it 3 |
M3m chapter 19 . 5/26/2013 Add more smexy, though I do love the fluff. |
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 19 . 5/26/2013 aaww love it :). |