Brilliant. XD
Sweet sexy and funny. The story was cute and in character. I think Yurick and Zael are a good couple. Love how Dagran was awake at the end too.
Thanks for this. I loved it.

Zael is a light brunette isn't it

WHY ISNT THIS PAIRING MORE POPULAR? It was beautiful! Now one of my favorite pairings. I loved it! It was really well constructed!

I love this so much! 3 I almost died when Zael said "I'm a little proud of it." And not to mention "Dagrens awaka right now, so he won't mind." This is great! I hope to see more soon!

Oh my gosh! I thought I was the only one who loved this pairing!
Zael x Yurick is my OTC!
The details are amazing, you even added the fact that Zael can't smell!
I can even tell exactly where this took place. It's amazing. I laughed at Dagran.
Please make more Last Story fanfics!

OMG! THIS WAS SO GOOD!

Yurick and Zael are my OTC (one true pairing)
and the details are amazing!

Thank you so much for writing this! I've been playing the game and thinking how great they would be together and really needed to read a story like this. It was great!

Oh my...this was absolutely lovely! I wouldn't complain if you decided to write more on this couple.

Please write more about these two, please !

And I thought I was the only one who supported this pair :3 I love this!

Ohmyrah! I thought I was the only one who thought these two would make a good pair(: I loved your story, it was bloody brilliant. Keep it up?