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Great Ideas- Excited to read your story!

I read this again and i still love it as much as i did the first time. Hope that sentence makes sense. Anyways, just to let you know how much i enjoy reading your stories. They are absolutely delightful and quite thoroughly enjoyable to read. Thank you.

Lovely! Very funny and interesting. I really liked the Lucy in the sky part, I read the prequel part and it made this part even better!

Please write more! Especially on your Life, Lies and Video Surveillance...and you NEED to follow your dream and screen write for tv shows. you got talent!

Great story, well written. You captured them well.

oh my gosh I love it! so in character and you nailed Kensi and Deeks' knack for the witty banter. great job!

All five are very much fun to read, but the best of them is Lucy. Thanks for these!

hahaha this was really good. You've got the characterization down of these two perfectly.

I would love, love it if you could expand the LSD storyline. I would love to see Deeks reaction to her possible death from it as well as read what else she did while on it :)

Keep writing for Densi :)

Cute. I like how he decides to take his dog and leave her the twinkies. What is the chance they are already gone?

Awesome! Each song was so fitting.

Love it! Very cute and very original! The banter was perfection :D