WOW. That's hot. And fast. LOL. But I think that did it, the no-nonsense rushing. The desperation. Totally OMG (Oh. My. Gale.) :D

Utterly rushed and immensely fast paced. But that's why I like it; it emphasizes the intensity of that moment.

Woah super fast smex

not how they would act.

"I love you." The words were always there. Made me cry so bad. Loved it

I am happy to say that I've never read a fic like this one before. Very unique! A little unrealistic, but still good nontheless. I just love your stories so much and hate it when they eventually come to an end. Maybe you could consider doing a Gale/Katniss multi-chapter? That would be awesome!

Anyway, great job.

So good. I love one-shot sof them, really passionate and violent and whole even when everything is breaking. Loved it.

Love this! You should definitely write more :)

This was incredible! Beautifully written.

Awesome! I wish that's the way it had went. Peeta was a great guy, but Gale? C'mon...who wouldn't have picked Gale? I hope you write more stories

I WISH it would have gone that way. Gale can say good bye to me (or Katniss I suppose) that way anytime he wants ;)

Yeah, this was a proper goodbye :D Awesome! :)

This is very well written. It's so sad, but very realistic. Both Katniss and Gale were in character, and you really nailed Katniss's point of view and thoughts. The instant I was done reading, I checked for other stories from you, and was disappointed there weren't anymore :'( Please keep writing!