Very interesting, intriguing. Was it a dream? It must be, but I'm not sure now because of the imprint into the side of her hand. So please, please will you continue?
PLEASE?

Wow, this is a great and lovely start. Beautiful written. The little girl is adorable. Will you please update, I love to know where you're going to take us with your story. So please, please update soon, if you can of course.

Please, please continue, I can't wait.

Great start, find it very fascinating, please update soon if you can.

Please update soon, can't wait for the rest of your story

This is intriguing, can't wait to see where you're going with this.

This is intriguing, can't wait to see where you're going with this.

Brilliant plot, excellent writing, vivid description. I love where thus will go.

A great start! I have a feeling this is gonna be a great story. I hope you'll update soon.

Can't wait to read the rest of this story!