Wow. I love how you portray this. I have to say that I have never even considered laxus and Erza together but this story and this other one I just read, have been pretty darn good. So now they are a ship for me haha. This was written nicely. Love the writing style.

PLEASE ! PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU ! PLEEEEASSEEE !

DO ANOTHER LAXUSxERZA STORY I JUST FREAKIN LOVE THEM PLEEEEEEAAASSEEE !

yeah annoying i know xD

BUT PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE XD

OH, LUX YOU ARE MY FAVOURITE.

I like your style! Digging the ICAU, too :D

This was great :D I had a good time reading it :D

I actually...really liked this. I don't think I've ever considered them as a pairing...but you didn't really portray them as a pairing...at least not entirely. It's a bit strange. Hm. I don't much like Jellal anyway, so, I approve. Good job.