cute set of stories so far.

Eez good :D
A few grammatical errors, but who even cares! It was still great :D

this is a good story. No grammer errors that i could spot. icouldalmost seethis happing,it was well written, a tad bit moredetailswouls be nice,but pleasedont go overboard on details please. thank for writting a great story. I better see more bolinora too!

Teehee...Jinoras comment made me smile

Pretty good short story